Please update, we like your stories so much and were excited for your next chapter we hope you will update soon

Escritora por favor continua esta historia que es muy buena .

I personally find this story to have good potential. However, the grammatical mistakes become increasingly evident with every sentence. I know it's only a fanfiction and not everyone can write an amazingly structured novel, but I do wish you get a proofreader or at least use a website (Like grammarly for example) to correct your mistakes. It's a headache to read a wall of text that feels like it'll crumble down since there's not proper foundation or structure. I wish you the best, as well as your story but I also wish you take this to heart and think about improving your writing skills. You can do it, believe it okay?

You are in trouble Haruka! That's my occupation. - Love it ! it seems it will be an interested story :-)

I was disappointed coz you wasnot continued,please u

As far,you are a good writer...im enjoyed your .

please update, i want to see the genius michiru

You better update this too. It's been so long since your last update. What happened to you?

I like when michiru is in control, your story is good. I hope you finish it soon!

Update!

Update please, i feel sad when a story i really liked left unfinished :(

Who the hell is Kaioh Michiru? Come on, it has been a very long time
How are you doing? Busy very much?

Update please...

I wonder if what's going to happen next! Thanks for the reply by the way, made my day :D

hey...hey,,,, you made it...
the story make me want to read more very soon

very nice story...