Excuse me while I go sit in a corner and feel sad for a very long time x_x ahhhh this was heartbreaking, so so sad, I'm glad Cain stuck by Abel's side until the end but poor Cain :'( sniff.

Im not crying! YOURE CRYING! DX

i was gonna leave a review but i don't know what to say other than the fact that i am crying

Holy shit this is sad. I'm crying. Though I find this story very well written, and the storyline is nice, and original.

That was perfect. and also horribly painful. there's a huge pain in my chest from reading all of this but I don't think I've read something so well done in a long time. you are one impressive writer. seriously, this was phenomenal. keep up the amazing work and sorry to hear about that one crappy comment. thanks for writing this; it'll probably keep me up thinking tonight.

Fuckin cried like a baby at this. Just discovered Starfighter recently and then went looking for fanfiction. Well done. Horribly, sadly beautiful.

You...
You made me sad...

Uuuhh, I shouldn't read tragedies. But I really love the way you wrote - to me everything was so IC! You did an awesome job here, I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece, though now I'm crying very hard...
I wish to read more Cain/Abel from you! Maybe some version of their future without an ending that breaks my heart? ;_; I NEED happy stories .
But still, this was absolutely perfect.

"You really need to eat less. Getting kinda squishy." - well, there needs to be some funny part to ease in a chara death.

oh man. again, i can't write anything coherent to this.

just tears, and heart throbbing, and more tears, and why? why? why? but it needed to be done.

and poor Cain - wasn't able to say those three little words. but Abel would have known all along, would have known by the way that Cain handled him, by the way that Cain breathed him in like a needed drug (hehe, working on previous Abel is snow white drug dealer analogy here - still can't get over the awesomeness of that!)

yeah, he sounds so desperate, so desperate to have his Abel with him. aw, Cain, come here to the fandom for a big hug! we'll resurrect Abel for you! :)

i'm just gonna ignore how crazy that sounded :P

love this story . LOVE LOVE LOVE! 3

i really don't know what to say. it's' all so sad and enlightening and informative . . . and sad. did i mention sad?

to be completely honest, i do like tragedies. they allow for a perspective to be placed on life, something much more real and tangible than the ever socially desired "happy ending". i mean, i like happy endings and all, but i've read - and watched - so many cheesy happy ending that they sometimes just make my stomach turn. and the thing is, there aren't that many happy endings in life. which is why i suppose people prefer stories with happy endings. but at the same time, it gives the impression of false hopes and expectations, and sets people up to be hurt.

blurgh, i'm rambling again.

i really love how the story's progressing so far. it's ripping out my heart and allowing me to FEEL in a way where i don't get damaged.

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yes, sense it does make! (that was pretty awful Yoda talk, right there . ..)

this was CUTE! :) Cain being Cain, being a jerk and a nice boyfriend all at the same time. and now i'm curious as to how he uses this against Abel in bed . . . . *stares up at you with Abel puppy dog eyes in hopes that a small scene shall be written? at least a memory?* haha

okay, reading the whole Praxis dances with Abel part made me laugh so hard - mostly because of what's happened in the comic recently, with Praxis' obsessive dreams and all-

AND KEELER! a seductive drunk! what would he do without Encke? XD

cute, but still maintaining the fact that Abel will never be the same. leaving that slight edge in the story, despite the fact that this is most likely meant to be a happy distraction, was brilliant! 3

Cainy-wain! LOVE!

and their whole relationship here, in which one is not completely sure of the other's boundaries and vice versa .. ..very well done.

comical and sweet and melted my heart with how self conscious Cain can be around Moses - though considering it's those eyes that make him react as he did, it doesn't surprise me much. sigh; Cain has issues. oh wellz, he's still hawt as hellz.

this was a great chapter! :)

forget 5/5, you get double that on 5! oh god, that killed me. Abel .. . world spinning, and hastily wanting to spin with it too, because he can't bear to observe the scenery passing him by anymore.

sad, but much needed for the story.
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BUT THIS IS STILL AWESOME! FUNNY AND BRILLIANT AND NOT A MOMENT OUT OF PLACE! :):)

i LOVED! 3 every moment was perfect! and Abel's not the only comedy genius here! and i mean that sincerely, not in the sarcastic way that Cain throws complements at people ;)

you set up Abel's father quite nicely - especially with his details towards the shoes. and you also show a nice human/concerned side to him, one that is observant despite his observations contributing towards a bias

haha, i loved how the "shirts untucked" was the biggest clue to get Abel's father to realize what was going on - of course he'd think there would be something improper happening about if his prim and proper son was walking about with his shirt untucked and in disarray. very nice! :)

"picking up strays" - ouch. though i suppose, this being Abel's father's thoughts and all, it's not exactly out of place. still - i want to punch the bastard. hooray, you make me feel SPECTRUMS of emotions at once! i love you! :)

"in a gesture so tender Martin wanted to punch the bastard in his face" - LOVED! i feel so much emotion here i just want to burst into waterwork and that last line - omg, i really have no words to express the incredible journey i just experienced reading this one little chapter! 3 3 3

you are beyond a doubt amazing, and i hope you never stop writing! :)