So good! I cried haha! I love love this story!

While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling only, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all detailed descriptions of the physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted such as Archive Of Our Own.

Great story please update xx

I LOVE IT! OMG! THAT ENDING!

damn sweetie, too bad there can't be a sequel to this story. i love both Egyptian and Japanese culture and i enjoyed reading this story so much i keep reading it over and again. whenever you're not busy saving lives i hope you will be able to finish writing Demons. i read your recent update and loved it. so keep saving those lives girl and i wish you well.

I thoroughly enjoyed your fanfiction! Keep of the great work! I hope you find time to write some more in your busy life

I envy you, you're such a talented author ;w;

Lovveeeee this. Omg.

This was an awesome story! So many details and the plot was great. Thank you so much!

So good! Each mushy and lovevy scene made me feel tingles through my heart and sad part made me cry :) simply perfect

I loved reading this story. The depth and thought you put into your characters is amazing. I wish I could write like you. You are amazing I hope I see more of your work in future. Goodluck with anything you put your mind to in future too. :3 nya *nekochan out like kuro-yuki*

l love your fic pls complete DFMP and your author fics .I lovevti read your fics your my favorite .plsssssss update I am waiting for it and I hope you wont make your fan disappointed

i love this story!

i love this )

this fic is so awesome
arigato