Creepy. Sexual encounters without consent are not cute or quirky.

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Yikes! You can’t ask for consent when the person is sleeping! Smh at Lucy. While I understand that this is a work of fiction, asking for consent will always make everything way hotter

I agree with the others don't stop this story here its been really sweet now let them love each other in real life emotionally and physically.

Good story here.

Obviamente QUIERO MAS
MUCHO MAS NALU
escribes hermoso gracias :3 3

Lo pondre en favoritos, me encanto 3
Natsu es hombre iva a tener sueños eroticos tarde o temprano XD

I absolutely love this story, excellent work. Were you planning on a third chapter though? There needs to be some kind of resolution.

*gags*

Wow Lucy. And u say natsu is the perverted one

I really agree with the people who said it shouldn't be a two shot!
Love your work and I hope you do get to make time for this to be more of a two-shot. It really has potential to be a full long length for us NaLu fans

How did Natsu not spill all over himself when Lucy's body is just...perfection and curves.

nicely done

Ah, I really wanna find out what happens next. U should make another chapter of them getting together in real life and not Natsu's dream life :)

You somehow make Lucy look like a 10-year old child, that doesn't know anything about sex, hormones and etc.. Also she was the whole time like "This is Natsu, my best friend, and teammate ( the guy I have a crush on). Even though he's a normal guy like any other, I don't think that he can get a boner or a _naughty_ dream. He's Natsu, after all." That was the way I felt the story going on about, but if you scratch that little minie thingie, then it's a really nice story with a nice storyline :). So, I hope that you don't hate me and I'm sorry for my harsh critic that came, but I hope you understand my opinion :)