I loved the imagery
Awesome story

Amazing story. Loved the way how you portrayed Tony's emotions in such a realistic way. Please write a follow-up of sequel, so that I can read and hate Steve once again.

Did they break up? I can't help but think Steve is an asshole

I wish we could give kudos

I love what you did with this story. I love the raw emotion that comes from Tony, but I'm so mad at Cap right now... How dare he hurt him!
(This is how i feel right now ugh)
But really, thanks for writing, it was beutiful and i hope to see more beautiful things on FFN!

Oooooo.

This was really angsty and sad. I loved it.

Aaaah! So saaaad! :,-( Very well written.

Awesome. Brilliant. Perfectly in character. Honestly one of the best stories I've read on here. It was just so perfect, so in character, such beautiful and detailed descriptions I could see it happening.
The only thing that sucks is that this was from a personal experience! Sorry for that! I know break ups :/
But I feel like your experience and emotion is what made this story so vivid! Honestly, It had wonderful twists and a beautiful plot. It's nice to see a story about Steve cheating rather than Tony by the way! Really well done, great character study and excellent read! Interesting!
rousey

Um. Holy. Shit.

This, god damn, usually I detest/loathe/unfavour anything that has just too much adjectives since I don't know it's just not my cup of tea. But oh my god. This is the fucking best - and I mean /the best/ vivid descriptions I've ever seen that was not boring, not /stupid/ and just plain /perfect/.

My heart was freakin /aching/ as I read this. First time a story really made me feel like ..I don't know, it made me feel as if I could just FEEL it Tony's heartbreak..it's as if it was so realistic.

I've never actually been cheated on but if this is how it feels like especially how you wrote it...fuck man...

I hate to the be the sadistic person, but will there be a "chapter 2" on this where we read more of Steve's reactions or his thoughts? He's the ass in this one although you captured his character so well. Christ. Still can't hate either of them but Tony UGH I'm rambling LOL it was just perfect.

Oh that sucks majorly! Im so sorry. I know how you feel. I was cheated on myself. You described it almost perfectly. Good job.