I loved this story. I was wondering if you were ever gonna update. I really want to see how you take this.
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Is this story dead? Because I really like it (jup you really made me like btr fanfics ) and I really get it if you will not upload it in a long time, but I just wanted to know. I think Logan and Carlos are a really cute couple -

Oh Im so anxious to see what will happen to Kames I love them so much :) I know I havent reviewed this story but it is really amazing :) PLEASE update soon! :)

Review

Lol. I have to mention this first. I love the ending. Here I was thinking the whole chapter was James talking to carlos and Kendall to Logan but the small interaction at the end was priceless. It was still Logan commenting to James but it was about Carlos. Lol. XDXD. I think Logan is a bit jealous ... Or an anal, annoying prick who won't let Carlos talk to other girls. Lol. I'm willing to bet Logan is jealous and not the later possibility ;).

James knowing Logan had a crush is funny. Is James that narcissistic that he thinks everyone loves him? Lol. Probably. James is that type and Kendall is just the man for him ;)

And James giving Carlos a pep talk was really good and in character. Idk. I just hate out f character remarks but you always write in character and it makes a better story. But back to Carlos, that boy needs some self esteem and just f**k Logan's Brains out. Literally! He needs to f**k Logan until Logan shuts up. He needs to take that giant stick out of Logan's butt and shove his even bigger stick in. Lol XD I haven't had a good of cargan in a while.

The kames is interesting. I thought it was interesting from the beginning. Two hot guys loving in the same apartment. Something is bound to happen. And now James needs to get his man ;)

Great chapter. I want more! :)

Btw FIFA is taking over! I can't go through one day at work without someone playing the game in he background. It's not a bad thing though lol XD GO NETHERLANDS ;) (only because the USA lost :( )

Well all four have to sort out themselves about their feelings. Asshole James how could he forgot about Carlos and leave him alone! Aww poor Carlos has to deal wit strangers asshole James! Well now Logan knows himself how he feels about Carlos hehe :)

Happy to see an update, understand your busy & things. Glad Kames is sortof working out, they both need to just get over it & admit their feelings. Same for Logan to Carlos! ;)

Omggg please please update man I love this story I read it from the start again it's just too good. Gawwd don't keep us waiting I beg.

I hope you're happy-I'm totally reading this in the office because I was so excited about it updating! Seriously though, can they just get their acts together and admit they're all in love?! No, nm, that would be boring. Can't wait to see what you have planned!

I love this story, updated soon!

OH GOSH UPDATE PLEASE Dx

Huh wat a weird relationship Kames have? Crazy horny perverts. Hope Cargan don follow their footsteps

LOL! Freakin' SOOOOOOOO much! (first, sorry about the wait. I thought school gets easier and less stressful after school but ... -.-' I can pm you about that lol) BUT OH MY GOD! THe KAMES in this is soooooo crazy. What is wrong with them?! Ar ethey going to have sex or not? Or are they going to be together or no?! OR WTF IS WRONG WITH EVERYONE AT WORK!

lol everyone loves to gossip don't they? lol But seriousy what is the matter with Lily? Did she have to blurt all of that? Now al four of the guys are going to be awkward round each other. Carlos and Logan are going to avoid each other. Kames are ... idk what Kames are doing. They have sex and they act like they still hate each other ... what is going on with them lol. This chapter is CRAZY and in a good way. I'm confused as HECK but I love. I truly can't tell what you're going do with your character because everything I know about them changed. It's like you said, Kendall is structured and thinks things through but he made a bet with James involving SEX!? That is as impulsive as you can get.

SO ... idk lol. I want to know more. This is crazy. And lol the rules-breaking XDXDXDXD.

But what is going to happen with cargan [. I wish Lily didn't do that but this might be the kick they need to get the cargan rolling ]. But ... GRRR . Logan CAN'T BE WITH JAMES! lol XD ]

Great chapter. I was a thrill to read your update. It was chaotic, crazy, weird, (sexual hehehehhehe) and just a pleasure to read. It makes me want to update me story. ... I wish I have your drive for writing.

And James on DWTS is SMEXY! But I don't think he is the "best" dancer [. He's hot but the boy is stiff and his technique is off a lot of time. [ sorry [ I took ballroom dancing for seven years so I judge on the technical aspects. [

Yay! You updated. Wish I cans at the same for me. First off, I was as angry as Lily when hat happened. Poor Carlos and Logan, I wanted to cry.

I had to re-read the whole thing because you hadn't updated in ages.

Happy to see an update! Hopefully Logan will start noticing Carlosas more than annoyance. Love Kames, hope they stay together somehow! :)

Dude! That was amazing! I saw it updated and I was like... wah? No way... So excited! (and yes... James on DWTS is sexy as hell!)