Jasper in love with Bella IMO

Cheater is always a cheater.

Finally. I would Kill edward or something like that. don't think he deserves anything

Why does everyone kept downplaying things? Calling it a simple mistake and even going so far as to refer to it as 'one time thing'. He had an affair for MONTHS. That's more than a one time thing and definitely more than a simple mistake.

I'm not sure how Edward can claim to never remove the ring when everyone saw him without it. When Bella herself tossed his ring in his face. The very ring that he hid in a drawer after it became tangled up in his mistresses trashy thong.

I love the story. but Alice, Lord she is annoying

If Bella is 13 in chapter 1 she can’t be 15 four years later.

I literally can’t read this anymore. It’s bad enough that you made Edward out to be a complete douche but having everyone disappear for years or months at a time then magically show up every few days, getting Edwards siblings to tell Bella about him cheating then having each of them tell everybody else what’s going on then everybody having the cheek to say that Bella should stay with Edward and that her suicide attempt was bad for them!

There is so much wrong with this entire story.

Why couldn't Edward go into the birthing room? There's no time limit on when he could go in.

And I don't understand Charlie's question of "Can we even give birth to twins in our family?"

What does that mean? Obviously, since Bella just did! Maybe he should have asked if there was a history of twins running through the family.

I've criticized this story a lot, because it was very unrealistic and at times, childish. But, it was well-written from a grammar stand point. It kept lots of us readers hooked. Compelling, though not fully thought out. Well done.

"Jasper didn't control my life." No, that would be Edward, who held Bella against her will many times.

So, how many times did Bella say she wanted to see Angela when she got back, and THIS is the only time we see her? I mean, what's really the point of her character in this story?

And what was the point of REPEATEDLY mentioning Jasper was adopted in this story?

And, what of the Cullen/Swan businesses? They sounded like they were on the brink of failure and bankruptcy until they forced Bella and Edward to get married. Yet, they divorced less than a year later.

I'm disappointed in Bella. It's almost a Stockholm Syndrome situation for her. Maybe I should pity her character instead.

Uhhhh...you don't get taken to the police station for speeding.

Bella was driving herself...why didn't she drive home instead of going Edward's? And she's not hungry, but he wants her to cook for him. It's all about him. He never cares about Bella's wants and needs.

ugh...so they're together? I really hoped not.

Um, Bella, if you tell someone you're LITERALLY being held against your will, don't be surprised when they take you LITERALLY. And she is being held against her will, if Edward is going to keep dragging her from the airport. Bella should just drive away.

Jacob realizes he still loves Tanya? okaaaaaaaay...whatever. Just like being a divorcee isn't some death sentence for future relationships, getting married because you're pregnant isn't something that's totally frowned upon in today's world.

The police cruiser is there probably because Edward bribed the cops and they thought she was leaving town via car, like I suggested. lol

The strongest drink at the bar was straight vodka? LOL

The woman has a daughter, which MUST mean she's married! OBVI! lol

And Edward wasn't specializing in divorce cases (I thought that was the other guy, who specialized in divorces of married people!), so why would a case with a mother mean there was trouble with the husband?

And just as I was feeling hopeful for Bella in the last chapter, she f***s herself over again at the end of this one.

Edward has been irredeemable in this story. Not just for his actions 8 years ago, but during this time period as well.

Well, at least Bella is making some sense at the end here.

Stubborn like a stalker!

Jasper seems to be the only voice of reason.

She had no choice but to let Edward kidnap her? Security wouldn't help her? Edward is such an asshole. Why would she want to get back with him? It's because he's hot. AMIRITE?

Edward is so selfish. It's not Bella's responsibility to assuage him of his guilt. Even if she says she forgives him, that's for HER, not for him. Complete and total narcissist. He thinks Bella should be around for HIS sake; to make HIMSELF feel better. Again, not her responsibility.

"Do you want to bring her in yourself? She's not some doll. I can't do that." OMG! That's EXACTLY what he's done with her: just grabbed her like he owns her, like she's a bit of property.

These characters are disgusting. Bella needed to leave and get some therapy. She wasn't going to get any peace with "friends" like Alice around.

I think that she's given up because Edward would eternally harass and stalk her, bribe people to get what he wants, and hire people to keep her on lockdown. She's too stupid to use legal channels to get restraining orders on the Cullens and too weak to stand up for herself.