I really like this story! Please let me know w if you are going to update and finish it!

July of wich year?

Nice fanfiction,I lov it.

I have just re-read this and cannot wait for the updates in July. I am so pleased that you have decided to complete it.

Glad you're continuing with this.

the story is worth it!

Cool!

I have just read this story, and think it is wonderful. I sincerely hope that you will be able to find the time to finish it. Hopefully looking forward to an update.

Wow.

excellent. waiting for more.

Thanks for the update!

I can't wait for the next chapter

Thanks )

Reviews come from readers who love a story and from a writer who writes well and effectively. Asking for reviews just so your story may gain popularity will only lead to people believing your intentions are to gain status and not because you want opinions.

You've got same basic grammatical errors as well, such as the difference between saw or seen.

Your story has a good plot, but from what I read, Edward and Bella's relationship happened quite suddenly. Along with that your sentences are really abrupt and colloquial. It makes the story sound choppy and awkward.

I'm not trying to bash or hate on your story and I hope you don't take it that way. I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism so you can see why people do or do not review.

Can't wait for more! Loving the story!