Certainly you should continue. There's never enough HitsuMatsu around.

hey this is good keep writing.

Awesomr story, you shoulf definitely continue!

Really good :) Can't wait for update!

I like the start but I must warn you that I've seen a lot of people force the relationship
Example: toshiro just sheds his fellings to her out of no where (ooc!) or something like that!
But I'm sure you will do great just ALWAYS remember to think about how a character would REALLY act and not how you want them to :) and last but not least can't wait for the update!

You should continue this it's a solid start and aside from a few minor mistakes in grammar it's pretty well done.