hi loved it, please update!

Another! :D

I must admit, when she wet herself i went, 'she peed herself? Thats taking it to the extreme!' but everything else was fine. You kept everyone in character but... will you ever update?

Can't wait to rad about arya and tywin.

Read this a while ago, and have come back and read it again because it's just so brilliant! I LOVE the way you portray the Hound, and the way Sansa is physically trapped matching the way he is trapped in his obedience, it would be lovely if he could just leap to her defence but he just CAN'T...it's always been my favourite aspect of his story and you've written it beautifully :)
Cannot wait until the next installment, also a big fan of the way Arya and Tywin interact!

Sorry for the rambliness
K x

PS I'm kinda with you on the non-romantic side of things for these two. Romance stories full of kisses and sweet nothings can be ok, but that's not the connection I realistically see for these two. (Sorry for the longest, least sense-making comment ever!)

Oh good! You're focusing on my two favourite 'segments' from Season 2 :D It was always most exciting when the focus was on either Sandor/Sansa or Twyin/Arya. You did a great job with the first chapter keeping them in character. Can't wait to read more!

I dont know...you have a right your story, but this just isnt my cup of tea. Too much humiliation of Sansa, urination and all, Joff laughing away, etc, (and then through all that with her being all"Awww, poor Sandor-even if he virtually kills me I will still forgive him")enrages my soul. I personally do like Sansa and Sandor together, if not utterly physically as of yet, then very soon-ish. Fact is, as of the books,he does feel attracted to her. She doesnt yet, but later on kinda does...after escaping KL.
Your writing in and of itself is plenty good btw...continue with it. I just dont enjoy Sansa being harmed by SANDOR to this degree, then her being okay with it, and feel it is very much OOC for him, as well as for her to be so forgiving of him in said situation. Just my two cents. To each his/her own though.

No! no, no,no! That is wat too OOC for Sandor, he would never ever hurt Sansa like that! If he did Sansa would never be able to trust or love him...sorry but just no! Do the words "I won't hurt you Little bird" sound like a man who would do that to a girl he loves?