This is a great work, you're executing it perfectly.
I see in AO3 you had 15 chapters planned...it'd be a shame to not see this story through. Here's hope you'll get back to it someday :)
Thank you for what you wrote so far.

My gods. You are a positively amazing author. I am so impressed by the way you were able to weave an extraordinarily compelling story backwards. The way you write is equally harsh and soft. Even the seemingly ancillary descriptive moments add so much. And further...the way you wrote it, this wasn't a one night stand at all, was it? How you were able to reveal that while never stating it I find just as fascinating as the story itself. Thank you for this! You are wonderful.

What a brat!

This is amazing!

This is written very, very well, but I can't get past Emma's sexually aggressive attitude toward Regina. Telling Regina that she knows she wants her, just to get her into her apartment, is unsettling. As for Regina-surrendering is not consent and I feel that you've romanticized a dangerous situation. I hope you clear this up somehow.

My first review goes out to you! The characters are made so real and believable, I love the dialogue between Emma and Regina. The one night stand scene is so hot, I cant even. And dont even get me started on the descriptive writing, its really all around well written. One of my favorite fics Hope you get back to writing soon!

good story! :) can't wait to read the next chapter :)

ahhhh more please!

I love where this story is going. please keep on going.
please. :D

Hi! This might be the best swan queen fic i have read so far! The characters, the dialogue between Emma and Regina - it's perfect! I really REALLY hope you'll finish this fanfiction, because I am curious now how everything will turn out at the end.

Keep it up! This fic is great!

I love this chapters really cool how the story is narrated love it;-)

great fic! Your way of writing Regina and Emma is stunningly in character.
Now I know how and "why" they ended up sleeping together, but ... what will they do after this? Will Emma let it be an one night stand? And what is between her and Ruby? Did she cheat on her?
I am hooked.

You can deny it all you want like her!

Really great story! Your caracters are amazing and act like the real ones. It's maybe the best part in your fic because I've really liked your Regina, she's exactly like in the show and her reaction are perfect.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hope the SwanQueen will happen again (héhé)!

Thank you!

PS: sorry if I made a lot of mistakes but I'm french.

loving this