Would it be so great that the Great Elder Asha got pregnant?
Wish you could write an epilogue epilogue on that...But Asha would not tell Laurence/Lauren that she carried his child.

I left my first review of this story on 8-28-16, but I’m leaving another one to let you know that people are still reading BoLo/Doccubus stories and that we still re-visit our old favorites. Thank you again for this creative and entertaining story!

seriously？
Kenzi called Dyson?
I really think she has a thing for the wolf, and I really don't like Kenzi, on the show or in this story, she's just so annoying and selfish.

Cool Story and different from all Stories I‘ve read before.
Sad that you don’t write no more Doccubus Storys, you were great

Just don't see how so many Bo and Lauren fans write stories about Lauren giving or getting bj's what the actual fuck. We all know Bo was Bi. Hell she'd get it anyway she could but Lauren clearly didn't like men.

I hope they never read this shit.

Lauren lost her breasts and all Bo can think about was her new penis and dressing her in Dyson's clothes. Lauren should've went nude. That's just all around shitty.

I LOVE YOU

When you said body swapping, I was thinking the characters would swap with each other, but this Lauren becoming Laurence idea is much more creative as it allowed you to explore the BoLo relationship on a different level which I loved because you did it so well - Laurence being an incubus was brilliant to Lauren understanding Bo.

I laughed my ass off several times too! Kenzi was hysterical overall, and Lauren trying to be a gay man is also funny (though I'm sure Laurence did look a bit metro to Bo since Lauren was in there). Lauren being uncomfortable with her new package was also very entertaining, and the dressing room bj was great (glad the guy lived of course).

As a lesbian, I wasn't sure I was going to enjoy the sex scenes, but I actually did very much for several reasons: Bo never got confused that Lauren was the one she was having sex with, Laurence was an attentive lover, and you always write Doccubus sex scenes with hot, hot energy but also such emotion.

Thank you for creating this wonderful story! I'm sure I will read it again soon. Oh, loved the ending as well, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending. :-)

Awesome ending. I like the idea very much.

Wow! Just read this through and it's amazing! I loved every single chapter the character depth is great and I find myself wanting to see more of this Laurence in other fics. Their essence was so well captured to how Lauren is that the gender swap didn't bother me none and I find myself missing her character as an incubus.. Thanks for the journey and hope to read more of your stuff soon.

Really great story. You have a wonderful imagination and stay true to the characters.

hi! Where are you? We, FF readers we miss you! We'll never forget how great your stories are and all the incredible feelings we've had reading "What it takes" "surrender and all that comes after", and all your stories.
I talked about you on Twitter with Rafi's cover of "What It takes" as pic, faerever remembering the bliss of my first great FF emotions with Rin's "All in the Family" Trilogy and your "WIT", all that, linked to the bliss of LG S1 & S2.

This was such a fun read. Thanks for sharing. I'm sure I'll read it again and again. I wasn't expecting the twists and turns, downright entertaining. I loved every bit of it.

Really clever story! I enjoyed it immensely! I loved the ending and I really hope that Lauren does find a way to become fae so that she can live with Bo forever.

I honestly thought that was Kenzi' grave they visit. I love the ending so much, fluffy but not sappy ;). The idea of the story was awesome. You presented all their problems carefully and provide solutions maturely. Thanks for this!