Reviews for The Prince of Magic |
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LunaUchiha20 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 UPDATE PLEASE! |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
heisuke998 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 please continue your stories |
crimson petals chapter 1 . 6/21/2016 continue already |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 Please more update! |
Alzeno chapter 1 . 3/10/2015 update |
Bojack2011 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014 it is good |
koper chapter 1 . 10/24/2014 If his sister was framed for killing their's father, shouldn't naruto become king? So his nation almost ceased to exist and he become teacher instead of helping them? 0_o Well anyway hope you will continue this fanfic |
Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 There are a lot of articles missing and several suffixes are wrong. The phrasing could be better in a lot of sentences and some suffixes are missing all together. Also you used articles in places that they were not needed. Look out for these and have someone beta your story to reduce the frequency of these errors |
unknown chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 Please let Naruto be with Konoka please think of how strong their children will be and also they make a good match cause one; his a prince and konoka is a princss, two; Konoka is sweet and caring and Naruto is loyal. and finally three; she's very kincky (check her original info and her Negima?! info so trust me) |
fairy.tail's.storm.king chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 I hope konoko and the bird-girl is pair with naruto |
nick chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 How old is naruto? First 8 then 7 next19 instead of 22!Make up your mind man. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 when the update |
Duke of Blades chapter 1 . 9/16/2013 Hm, seems cool so far. I hope you continue this story, it has potential. |
darthrevan chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 when the update |