Lo de hacer la gente de la Via Lacta sensible a la Fuerza es una horrible porqueria clavada en un palo.

FUCKING AWESOME DUDE!

It's fantastic! The action was intense and I was invested in how intimate each character was! Keep it up!

Holy... Mother of... The forerunners? My... If there is forerunner weaponry cache of the planet, then the imps' are good as... Uh... Mmm... Vaporized flesh? Those weapons were designed to effectively combat the flood, but it also turns the target into literal ash in the wind. Better cross your fingers and hope there ain't any prometheans, or else both UNSC and Imp' forces alike will be rekt if they run into those frightening machines...

Wouldn’t it just be “The Death Star”?
Not “the first Death Star,”
Since at this time they had no knowledge of the 2nd station under construction over Endor
Just noticed that, lol

I would be surprised if this dude discontinues every story h starts just because he's interested in something else. abandoning stories indefinitely is one way to become hated by communities.

I have to be honest,the only good thing here is the fight scenes. Otherwise, it just stinks too much of Halo wanking. Also, the UNSC believed the rebel alliance way too quickly.

What's with all the idiots in the reviews? SuperMACs are canonically 50 Gigatons. The Infinity is more powerful than SuperMACs, and 3,000 megaton is only 3 Gigatons, like are you retarded or something? Like no wonder this guy pulls the weirdest shit when it comes to feats, when dribbling morons complain about him not nerfing characters they hate enough. Jesus.

I know this story has been discontinued but I've got to ask... how were the ISD's going to attack ships at 150k KM's? Canonicaly, SW weapons had a max effective range of a few dozen to maybe 100 KM's and at that range, had TERRIBLE accuracy. Most space battles took place at relatively close ranges, visual range, as their targeting systems were atrocious by even our standards. This is practically knife fighting range for the UNSC.

Err, Earth was NOT the last bastion of Humanity. The Covenant bypassed MANY inner colonies and even a few outer colonies when they struck Reach and Earth. Reach was discovered when a tracking device was attached to a damaged ship in transit to Reach after the Battle of Sigma Octanus. The Covenant then pretty much dropped everything and headed for Reach.

Damn. Sucks that this was discontinued.

Well, it was awesome while it lasted, and even though I have essentially no knowledge of Mass Effect, I'll give your new story a read too!
Hopefully, one day you'll come back to this.

Yours sincerely, H3ctic

So, I've just started reading (obviously) but I thought I'd point out a little mistake I saw, as from what I've seen, it hasn't been picked up by anyone else.
In chapter 2 (this one), the 7th paragraph, you wrote "a 'boy' not past the age of 20," but then "Rieekan couldn't blame 'her'"

If you're anything like me when it comes to writing, small errors are the bane of your existence and must be purged lmao.

Anyway, liking it so far. I'll continue to read and give a better review once I've seen more

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! That's IMPOSSIBLE!

I forgot to note this but, I really enjoy your story and have read this a few times. For SW tech info I highly recommend reading Swords of the Motherworld (SW/ME crossover) at least the first few chapters. I would also look at Wookiepedia, it's not perfect but it helps. It's divided into two sections Legends (Pre-disney) and Cannon (Post Disney).

I know this is dead, but it matters if you use this info for your relaunch. The Empire has begun mapping the Unknown Regions, essentially the very edge of the Galaxy. However this is largely unknown to the majority of the Empire and undiscovered species and systems are typically originating from there. Also there are a series of "companions" which are dwarf galaxies visible from the home Galaxy, but they are impossible to access by conventional means. (Companions Aurek, Besh, Cresh, Dorn, Esk, Forn, and Grek) I bring this up because Ozzel first identifies them as aliens simply because he doesn't recognize their ship type, and than recognizes English (Which is an Alphabet not used in the Galaxy mind you, they use Aurabesh for writing and Galactic Standard- commonly reffered to as Basic- to speak.) and brings up how they might be Humans. Later he further messed up by saying, "are you extra-galactical?" When a much more practical response is, "Are you from the Unknown Regions (Galactic Border)?"

I would like to point out that the Star Wars universe has thousands of species that all use the same writing style and language. They are so integrated that society doesn't divide based on race or species, they are all Imperial. That being said, COMPNOR is a humano-centric imperial program that pushes anti alien propaganda and largely refuses aliens access to the military. So racism has bled over into the imperial military and government. However, my point is, Ozzel would make no connections based on species until he sees them.