This was a cute (and a bit sexy) fanfic. But there were some minor mistakes but it's alright. We all make mistakes. Anyways, more people should also really pay attention to Edo Gray and Edo Juvia. I simply love this pair in the anime. It's quite adorable especially Edo Gray. X3 All that to aside, great job on writing this short story. Keep up the good work :)

Hi, that was a very nice story! O.o really enjoyed

I'm not a GruVia fan...damn you now I am. Well at least for the Edo versions.

餐厅被恶This is a good one. Edo Juvia does like Edo Gray. I thought so when I see her reaction when they met the other Gray. I sure hope they will get together.
In the official novel, Edo Gray does strip although it was not for Edo Juvia. For his nakama, he strip, he need to get to his friends on time, and his clothes are too heavy. He understand and he made his decision. I'm proud of him.