O/O

If only Edward did that to Bella; the series would be so much shorter. But then again, HE'S TOO SPARKLY IN THE SUNLIGHT

(･Д･)」Idfk myself XD

Still a better story than Twilight! Hehe! I agree- much better.. (Blush) Great story'

Twilight never has or will have anything on One Piece let alone Kidd and Law together.

It's actually pride but proudness is cool!

this is twisted but i like it

Oh gosh, don't compare your writing with "Twilight"! I mean, come on!... You're so much better than Stephenie Meyer (or whatever it's written).
Another good story :D I was starting to feel sad that it was only a drug's effect, but the twist of the placebo effect is great and cool ;D Law's so shameless sometimes...

LOL, god that was a good ending. awesome job :D!

The story is awesome and way better then twilight please write more

Yup, it is definatly a better lovestory than thwilligt .

OMG! I LOVE THIS! Such a brilliant story!
Especially adore the ending 3
Instant Favourite!

I had read this again during my free time (like a good KL fan I am, lol) and noticed some change.. I think the explanation part had been much clearer now :)

You're right - better than Twilight xD
Some typos/errors throughout the story, but they can be overlooked because the storyline is yummy. I like the idea, especially in the end - that came as a surprise, I like that (if it's good, and it is).
To sum it up: I liked it!

it sure as hell a better story then twilight. haha loved the story!

" HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA...Law's naughty. XD !"

lol.. Indeed he is :P

Though Law is older than kid by three years or so... I noticed that you called Law the younger of the two somewhere..

I love this.. Thanks for sharing!

The story is hot. Their..romp is sizzling and deliciously sexy, just the right amount of the fierceness, battle of domination, law's seduction and Kidd's roughness in every right of what a KiddxLaw could be..love how evil and twisted they are. Under influence of drug or not, they're already a perfect match for each other :D

It's also amusing how Kid wanted to take Law's 'innocence' since clearly and obviously that guy was far cry from that XD

P/S: Just a tiny wondering (which left a little unsatisfied feeling inside me at the end of it), I believe 'placebo effect' would be working *only* when the patient *aware* that he's taking a drug that the doc convincingly said would work (even it's actually affectless), which in Kid's case he only realized he had took the drug way later and Law had 'sneakily' put that in (he also stated the effect earlier, like 'blinded the user',etc).