Who is kuririn? Or do you mean krillin?

You know if your writing it in English you don’t need to add chan, kun and such to peoples names, they don’t in the English version either so no point in writing it out :/

Nice story but you give naruto characters more power they are not supposed to achieve..
naruto at power level og ki 40.000 And that's just the beginning.. naruto trian 1 hour
And suddenly he kick ffrieza third form. no no and no you can give naruto power levels of ss3 or ssg or mui..is known that humans from naruto or dbz like krillin Can't get much power like no way naruto thw loser cab get power levels of ki 2.000.000 Especially after an hour of training...The maximum that humans can achieve power levels of ki 300.000.000 max after 30 year of training...I know some of the reactions are already dead to see naruto vs ssj1 goku and naruto Defeating him

when are you going to update

Naruto should have had a higher power level due to being an uzumaki and being the jinchuriki since all uzumaki are known to have a higher life force and a larger amount of chakra then most ninja...i dontvunderstanf how sauskes is higher

Great story

I... Don't really like it.
At the beginning this fic was ok
Occasionall grammar errors were irritating but not too terrible, errors in names through? It was horrible and you did it all the time (Porunga and Cooler hurted me the most). Story was ok 5,5/10 and OC were... Mehh
I'll drop it

How long are we talking here? What do you plan to do?

The flashbacks were unnecessary.

this book is good

BRUH ITS A FANFICTION DBZ DICK RIDERS A MF FANFICTION WE KNOW THAT GOKU IS STRONGER THAN NARUTO BUT AGAIN ITS A MF FANFICTION YOU DUMB CUNTS HOP OFF THE AUTHORS DICK.

I bet all of the haters are all dbz dick riders lmao it’s a FanFiction you dumb bastards calm down

very good so far

FUCK THIS STORY, FUCK THIS CROSSOVER, FUCK EVERYTHING THAT HAS BEEN WRITTEN WITH YOUR ASININE WAY OF THINKING. YOU ARE LITERALLY A DUMB PIECE OF SHIT THAT KNOWS NO BOUNDARIES OF WRITING ACTUAL SHIT FROM A BABIES DIAPER, I’VE IT HAD WITH THIS. THERE IS NO POINT AND I DON’T EVEN THIS STORY ANYMORE, SO THANK YOU AND GOODBYE YOU STUPID JACKASS AND GO FUCK YOURSELF WITH A YELLOW JACKETS HIVE NEST YOU DUMB FUCK!

Man has it been a long time, and it seems that from what Vegeta told me in private, your heading to the planet which should help when Vegeta arrives, but how long will it take Vegeta to get there? I think maybe five chapters.

The fights were so badass this chapter, and Paradox has been captured thanks to Sasuke thinking. I also agree with what he was saying there is always going to be war, and evil out there.

But it seems that Ino had also died now man this must suck for Sakura now losing her best friend she is not having a good time right now in this arc is she?

But it seems that your still a girl, hmm I might change you back to being male maybe, but I wouldn't mind doing the next disclaimer.