This was really great - very true to character, I totally enjoyed it.

Beautiful and amazing story. Thanks !

Excellent story! I really really enjoyed it!

So beautifully, richly, perfectly imagined. Thank you!

Omg. That was so SO good. It never even occured to me that Castle could have nicked her while shooting and the horror that would have gone along with that. Wow. Excellent angle! Plus the tension on the ride home and the release of it all emotionally. Beautifully written.

Great job.

that was just lovely. thank you.

That was so beautiful. Definitely how it should have ended. Not that I'm complaining. It was a kick ass ep. Thank you for this. Made me feel better about the ending. I'll just remember it this way instead of the way it did.

Wow. Who ARE you, oh venerable and amazing writer? This was fantastic! There is a lot of really good writing in here. The first thing that struck me was when you commented on the setting "the cold wind from the river". I loved adding that detail. So many great little visuals that you gave us, like Ryans hand on Espo's back. Great stuff!

Intense but awesome. Loved it, felt the emotion. Found myself half waking up half way through and remembering it wasn't part of the episode, but it was playing that clearly in my mind. Great work!

Amazing simply amazing!

Absolutely wonderful! Thank you for sharing your talent. It's deeply appreciated.

wow that was intense, so emotional and dramatic and loving at the same time!

nice, kinda dark, but niceee. Thank u for writing it. :)