I love happy endings. It was a great journey from start to finish. You did a good job Gypsy.

Gypsy?

I absolutely loved it! Tight plot! Very exciting!

Samtwitch

Overall this entire story was great, except for one rough spot. I paarticularly like the last two chapters!

Sarah,

Wonderful story! Please keep writing more and don't let one person's narrow view put you off writing.

Talents should be encouraged and used in order to increase.

Great story, I'm glad you gave them a happy ending. I hope you write another story soon.

Bravo! That was a great story. Is there a sequel in the works?

Gypsy, have I told you yet how much I love this story? Sorry if I haven't. Love the 'taming' of the 'shrew'. Well done!

OH MY GOD! FRANK HAS ANOTHER BABY! You have to post the rest of this story NOW! I can't wait anymore.

I can just picture Frank spanking Keni! But, it's about time he caught her. Now, the question is what is she hiding from now, hmmm? Please post more.

Like I said, Ala John Wayne and Maureen O'hara. It is cute, and funny, but it treds a fine line between abuse and comedy. Sorry to sound so negative, the rest of the stories been great so far

OH, that was so short! You're trying to drive us nuts wondering what's going to happen. All I can say is he better catch her this time! Please post more.

C'mon. Quit teasing. Let's see "le Denouement" here.

Shades of John Wayne and Maurenne Ohara in the Quiet Man

About TIME! These two so desperately need to communicate with each other. Thank you for making them so real.

Well paddle my bottom and call me blue...what a tasty morsal to read on a Sunday night were reruns rule the TV.

Dare I ask/hope for more? ;-)

This is just great. Need more!