Funny!

LOLOLOLOL
Comedic gold.

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Hi

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LOL

Lolz keep on writing ! After all it more fun to make your own style!
And plus chat rooms are fun when chocolate and ice cream is involved XD

lol love it! XDDD

Ignore that previous review that you've gotten, I've seen fanfic's like this one before, and no one has ever cared, and trust me when I say that it's fine if you choose to write a fanfic like this. I personally do not usually enjoy chatroom conversations, but this one was actually quite amusing, and spread a grin on my face. I would like to read more, so I hope you would write more, because most other chats are not as funny as this one. (And I usually don't review stories, but I thought you deserved a real one :))
S.M.

Please note that the guidelines clearly state that stories containing chat/script format isn't allowed here. If you want to keep the basic premise of your story, you can rewrite it in a format that is accepted. Putting quotation marks around the dialogue and using he said/she said and other tags should fix everything up nicely.

If you don't want to rewrite it, you can do a Google search for places that will allow this type of content and simply remove it from here, and post it on there.

If you decide to leave it here without changing it, your story will be reported for breaking the rules and it may be deleted by a moderator.

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-Member Of Critics United-