Sakura and Onimeno are the best.

...gah.

This moment, when everything comes together like this, is my absolute favorite part, even though from a completely detached perspective, almost nothing happens in this chapter.

People often forget that Sasuke was even brattier in the beginning. Fanfiction often portrays a slightly toned down and more likeable version, so people get used to that and then think something like this is bashing. And in a story like this without constant exposure to the rest of his character, that notion is not exactly dispelled.

Okay, that is the most realistic (and also cute) team bonding I have read, period.

I am thoroughly jealous of your character writing ability.

Awesome start.

It did the job of both stripping any preconceptions naturally acquired through prolonged exposure to fanfiction in general, and also caught my attention in a very good way. It also captured something of what I loved from the Naruto series in general, but I'd be hard-pressed to figure out how to put what was good about it into proper words.

well, i cant see the picture on your bio tho coz the ip cant be found

The fact that Kiba is proud of his team thing is killing me XD. I freaking love how cute and hilarious their team is, and Kiba trying to one up the other teams is so in character for him! This story is so good!

This Sakura is actually so wholesome. I love how she's changing but isn't like some angst ridden oc now. She's still Sakura, just improving. Also she works so much better in this team.

this is such a good story!

I congratulate you on actually managing to wrap up your story in a comprehensive and satisfying manner!

You are a master at coming up with these strange situations. I have really enjoyed them! They are both compelling, and hilarious!

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Bwahahaha! I love it!

That was THOROUGHLY unexpected! Great writing!

I love the Shino perspective. You have really fleshed out these characters!