to be honest when I saw this crossover idea I was very excited. I imagined an Ise spawn who still had his core of being a pervert and him being forced into a darker world and having his personality tempered by it. A DxD world that was being darkened by spawn aspects as it went on. What I've seen so far is pretty much DxD characters thrown into the spawn universe and a rehash of the 90's spawn movie. I will keep reading since your political situation is interesting but I hope to see something more original as I get deeper.

i want more! this is so good!

One of the only worthwhile Spawn stories on the site and it's long dead.

Not worth it reading this. Pacing is too slow, and there are too many variables and point of views to know on what’s going on.

That's rough but I'm interested.

so rias is a bitch in this and a dictator, she hasn't forced her servants to whore themselves out has she

Oh, you lovable bastard you! Please don't end it here! This story is too good to get abandoned!

I liked the chapter!

I'm enjoying this truly I am, Spawn (Issei) has been an interesting character so far and an interesting change from his DxD counter-part. You made Issei interesting the same way Al Simmions was. However I hope you don't make Issei exactly like Al, your fight scene with Xenovia and Irina showed Issei and Al's differences and I really liked that. Issei should kill, he's Spawn after all, however his willingness to do it should be restricted. Issei isn't a harden soldier like Al is so some hesitation should be shown. People like Violator, Overtkill, Billy, and for DxD Beezlebub and Freed should be on his 'execute on a moments notice' list, but people like Rizer should probably just be crippled, he's Spawn after all.

All the other DxD characters seem to be in character, well all except one but we'll get to that later. Rias and the gang are still they're playful, seductive, serious selves. I do hope you'll give Kiba some screen time, he only got sbout half a season of it then just faded to the background.

The story is well written, I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes.

I haven't really seen any Madoka Magika, not a huge fan of Magical girl anime/manga only watched one episode of Prisma Illya, but that was because of its connection to Fate.

Now onto the negative part of this review. I saw some lines Issei had were ripped off the Spawn animated series, while this doesn't bug me too much do to most of them being witty one liners, however I believe you can be more creative then that. He's Issei not Al.

Now other then that there is only one more problem that bugs me and yes you guessed it, its Raynare's character. Now i'm not upset you're setting up Raynare to be Issei's #1 love interest in this story with Rias and possibly Irina being the other two. However I do believe she should be played as more cruel, as she never striked me as the guilty consious type. I believe she should get there by Spawn (Issei) pulling her ass outta the fire from the fallen angels, angels, and demons looking to wack her. Her character just doesn't sit well with me right now.

Yeah man other then that I love this story. Also yes I know you haven't updated this since 2015, and yes I do hope by you seeing this review you might be inspired to continue it. I can't wait for Rias and Issei to meet and see his reaction. Will he blame her for not getting there in time? Also will he save her from Rizer or will Rias save herself.
Seeya

are you alive? please tell me your going to continue this

really hope this gets and update soon its been a long time coming

Please invoke the divine spawn and be done with everyone you are the writer so male M.O.M apear and end it all

What fluffy spawn is this? I allmost died from laughing HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i just imagined spawn gropinf breats now HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA Spawn verse has power levels much higher and diferent then dxd so i would be carefull with what i would write

please continue to write this magnificent story

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