you really have to update this! I want to see where this is going! please?!

This is so lovely to read! I'm just getting into the Motorcity fandom and was a bit disappointed by the lack of fics when I came across this gem. :)

Your writing style is pretty good and the characters don't seem out of place. I'm very much so looking forward to the future chapters of their adventures if you decide to continue this.

Very cute story, really brought a smile to my face

I just love feel of this story! The characters feel very true to their respective canons, and I can hear their voices along with the dialogue you've written out. I'm super interested to see where the story's heading! Very nicely done so far! u

This story is absolutely adorable so far! Everyone feels in-character, the character interactions are cute, the story is interesting so far, and it's moving at a good pace. I love it!

You have to update this. This has got to be one of the strangest pairings I've ever read on this site. And I wanna know more.

I absolutely love this story!

Mike's interaction with Mabel and Dipper crack me up! I usually don't watch Gravity Falls but I absolutely love Motorcity and I love how you blended Mike into the story perfectly!

I really hope you update soon! You're story waay too good to just leave hanging! I want to see what happens next!

gfgghfdgh Thanks for updating! ;v; Mabel is so cute, oh my god. I wouldn't mind seeing her crush on Mike for a while with her dorky way of courting! But respect for his skills is good too!

never said it before. but this has been one of my favourite crossovers. mike is blended into the GF world organically (pardon the horrible images that might give off) and his interactions with mabel, dipper, and the other townspeople are realistic and enduring. especially for the former two. also he's being epic which is a plus.

i would go so far as to say you inspired me to write "it's a great kanohi mask, mabel pines", however small said degree of inspiration was.

Mike and Mabel's relationship is so :D :D :D :D :D :D!

Thanks for updating. For a while I was worried that this story was abandoned. Glad to see I was wrong!

ok so here is some advice form a future author to a present author mike and wendy should meat and make wendy full in love with mike and mike not fell the same way dipper is super jealous and this drive a wedge between them but put this idea in a later chapter when mike and dipper become friends it might be funny to see dipper try to compete against the almost perfect mike Chilton so give it a shot if you like

Damn, I've no idea what's going on here. Things are getting pretty intense...looks like a job for Mr. Chilton!

yeah it has been updated. I like dipper's paranoia in this chapter but it is a little jarring between the transition of chapters. I think a little more clues for this mystery would of helped it more. otherwise it is a good chapter and it is selling point is its characterization.

Poor Dipper :( Not easy being the one that sees everything. I always thought that with the show too. Sure, his sister is always there and stuff but she doesn't always see the things he sees or takes it seriously at first. I hope that shadow thing won't get to him now that he will be off on his own. Why is it even after just him (at least it seems that way) in the first place? I wonder what Mike would think to all the weird stuff going on. It seems that Dipper has a bit of a reputation around town and I wonder if Mike will hear of anything about the Pines. Their Grunkle Stan isn't the most upstanding citizen so they might get crap for being related.
Loved this chapter :) The little suspense going on with the shadow creature is very intriguing. I will definitely look forward to more :)

You've no idea how relieved I am that you're still working on this story. It's really awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Mike and Mabel's relationship makes me smile. :)