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  Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2013 I want to see this on the show |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/28/2013 Update soon please! |
 teenycee chapter 4 . 4/26/2013 lol, i love that even though they're in a life-threatening situation that they still fight egotistically. that's so mckono. i love this prompt! i love that steve dreads shopping with kono and that they get held up. it's totally something that would happen to them. |
| LifeOnMars97 chapter 4 . 4/11/2013 I always love the two of them being BAMF together but I also liked them doing normal couple-y things (i.e. the shopping this with Steve trailing behind and complaining). I love this collection because you never know what you'll get next...you really keep it exciting by changing up the genres and content. This was awesome and I'm excited to see what you have in store for us next. Please update extremely soon (sooner that with this one)! |
| bushy4 chapter 4 . 4/11/2013 nice powerhouse couple on their day off too |
| Dracomione-KoVeLover chapter 4 . 4/10/2013 OMG! You updated! So excited, and so happy that you have not given up completely on this couple! No words can describe this chapter... absolutely captivating! Awww, Steve is so cute when he is vulnerable... not wanting Kono to know that he wants to buy a ring... Please update soon! Thanks. |
| francis2 chapter 4 . 4/10/2013 Awww, this was cute. Crime never sleeps, but Kono does. |
| quisinart4 chapter 4 . 4/10/2013 No need for thanks, thank YOU instead for writing something. I know inspiration is hard to find these days, but you're one of my favorite writers because you really have such a great grap on Steve and Kono as characters and how their dynamic would be when together. I love the little things like Steve touching her in the shop to distract her, and Kono trying to be stern. Them working together to get each guy and playing up the panic attack was genius, and especially Kono being competitive and not letting him take over but wanting a chance to get the third guy too. So adorable :D I love the idea that despite his protective instincts and telling her to stay back, she won't listen - she's Five-0 too! :D So that was just awesome to read about them in action. And going home to each other in the end, aw :') Nice work, thanks for sharing. Hope you'll write more :) |
| robinh chapter 4 . 4/9/2013 Hey! I was waiting for you to post something . How fun! It was really nice seeing Kono acting like a girly girl, I loved it. Then, a minute later saving the day with Steve - obviously their day off will end like that - I'm sure nobody was surprised. Most of all I loved the ending so simple cute and beautiful. Thanks for writing. R. |
| FaithfulJourney chapter 4 . 4/9/2013 Awesome |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2013 Awesome fic with varied genres. Please update really soon! |
| msbookworm93 chapter 2 . 2/22/2013 This chapter was brilliant! I was laughing so hard, his mom makes me laugh! |
| LifeOnMars97 chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 You have tackled so many important issues in one prompt that the show writers haven’t even mentioned on the show (and they have had nearly 3 seasons with 41-minute episodes…says a lot). This was by far your best prompt, even if there was no romantic aspect to it; I'm surprised that this doesn't have tons of reviews. I know that you’re very busy and it’s really hard to find motivation and inspiration to write McKono with how season 3 is going McKono-wise but I hope you don’t leave readers waiting too long…hang in there! I look forward to reading the next prompt you have in store for us all. Update soon please! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 Great prompt! I hope you'll update this really soon! |
| thetimedoctor chapter 3 . 2/2/2013 I just read all of the chapters and its amazing! Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next prompt. |
