Haha you're right. This is porn. You have really strong control over the language, I'm so envious. And this shot is good :D

Super hot! And very well written!

just brilliant

I don't usually leave much comments on stories, but i felt the need to tell you that THIS was (and still is) way awsome. Really cool fic, keep it up!

Wow, this was really well written. The way it was so constructive, descriptive, made this very hard to stop reading. Excellent job! :D

Sexy and sweet and all together perfect

I love the way you wrote this, this was beautiful.

... I'm almost speechless. I'm amazed.

I loved this, really.

Continue the great work

Lots of Love

Zee :3

This is amazing. You should totally write a sequel with Derek's favorite position.