Reviews for Eryr |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can you please update. I really love this story and can't just leave it like that. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE FUCKING UPDATE! THIS IS AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() So at least Harry got taken by the good guys? I hope. |
![]() ![]() Only problem I have is. When has Harry ever left or went anywhere without his wand. And what kind of assassin leaves anywhere without a weapon(wand), novice were at least allowed a short knife. It’s jus I don’t believe he would go and do anything without his wand, he would hide it somewhere no matter what he’s doin or who told him to leave it. Other than that it’s terrific. |
![]() ![]() ![]() mmmm Kaito is hungry wants to eat |
![]() ![]() Very excellent chapter my friend, probably your best one yet and I wish to see more good chapters in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() *supicious stares* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Was. Amazing! But please... Don't tell me it just ends here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. A lot. Shame it was abandoned :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY |
![]() ![]() I would like to preface this with the statement that I wouldn't be commenting if I didn't like this story. My enjoyment outweighs my issues with it, and I want to help. Harry is 13 years old at this point. Laetitia is much older. She would not be flirting with him, or attracted to him, and honestly I doubt he would be attracted to her either. In no world would she describe him as tall, even if he gained a few inches very quickly, since at best he's a slightly taller than average 13-year-old, because unless she suffers from some kind of condition or mistreatment, or has dwarfism or something, she is taller than him. Maybe she was just being kind, I suppose, but that's harder to swallow when she appears to be flirting with him. Again, I am enjoying this story. Please don't take this the wrong way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disappointed at the end of this. You went from Harry knowing nothing, to fully awakening the memories of Altair and Ezio, to suddenly an Assassin team attack someone their boss knows is not only a wizard but the Boy Who Lived. Escalation this high is really poor writing and comes across as you wanting to just push Harring into Assassin/Templar war as quickly as possible. This type of storytelling is very much the Constantine Effect with the "if you see them, they see you" concept. It's quick, dirty, and in this case, ruined what was a very good story involving Harry, Hermione, Remus and Siris. You would have been better off Harry doing things to grab the Assassins' attention rather than a sudden attack squad who didn't even know anything about their target. |