Very interesting introspect XD I liked it

Aw, I love Turtle Toddlers! So cute!
And it's very interesting to read about Splinter's point of view. You reflected pretty well what's going on in his mind when he's thinking about his four sons... :)

Very well written and again, you inspire me! I thourghly enjoyed Splinter analysing the brothers strengths and weaknesses and trying to find a leader in all of them. Truly enlightening.

aw this was so CUTE! The hidden wrappers from Raph had me smiling... great one0shot! :)

loved it

Nice, I love how you focused on each of the turtles strengths and weaknesses.

Nailed it

See I love this story!

This is just written so well, even if it is a one shot that your beta may or may not have had a hand in ;)

You write Splinter beautifully, without turning boring! Very well done!

First ever one shot. And it's still totally awesome and amazing. Pleh! Pleh, I say!

I am awful at musing one shots. Just doesn't work with me. Not only were you bang on with Splinter's personality, his interpretations of the turtles were accurate. Really accurate. I am totally in love with this fic because you evaluated the turtles' strengths and weaknesses perfectly and mentioned the Raph-Don dynamic. A lot of people don't think about it much (including me) but you were wonderful.

I could probably spend a lot of time fangirling over this fic but I'll restrain myself. The small sneeze at the end... I could totally picture it and it was the cutest thing I have ever read in a fic. And My Little Pony? Is that the Friendship is Magic universe? I may or may not be on your profile. I think I sound like a stalker so

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I enjoyed this fic a lot. It was great.

Wow! Brilliant story, very believable. Your portrayal of Splinter seemed spot on and I loved the little piece about the candy wrappers. Excellent piece of writing.

Ah, what an awesome story. I can see Splinter having this conflict about each of his sons and then coming to the decision that Leo is the leader. You have two mistakes: Possible should be possibly and severe should be sever. Other than that, good job. I'll be eagerly awaiting more stories from you for sure.

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