(smiles sadly)
No, Jareth, we think dead mice and rats are yucky and gross.

(howling with laughter)

Beautiful make more

please please please please post these chapters this looks so interesting please i beg of you

This is hilarious. And the "less than enthusiastic 8.9" from Hoggle had me laughing so hard the laptop fell off my lap. Please continue: the prequel, the sequel, whatever. Love it.

So where is the rest of the curse? It's off to an interesting start.

Hate to be a party-pooper but I'm wondering.. what will Sarah's family think when they hear the noise in her bedroom.. :/

Random thought aside. That was a cute story. X3

loved it..keep writing please

Cool where is the rest of the story?

This sounds awesome! I am a little afraid of the dark Jareth, but know it will all turn out for the better(: Can't wait to start reading!

this was so sweet and hilarious at the same time(: Can't wait to read the prequel!

well I like it and I think you could start with a chapter or two it will be nice :)

I like!

This is so great! I laughed so hard when I pictured Jareth running down a street in heels and carrying roses while he's exposed for all to see. I would love for this to continue.

LEMON! LEMON! Oh, pretty pretty please? I will even Beta it for you if you like, if only to see this continued further. Jareth is PERFECT! You have him spot on. There is no better comparison, I think. I also like your ready wit. Please do continue. Or possibly write one for Christmas? That would be lovely.