Reviews for Charlie's Story
MegRyan15 chapter 23 . 1/9/2017
Poor Charlie-finding herself in such a dire situation: Being tied up to an electric chair, being either an experiment or interrogated for questions about aliens or in some government facility. Was it that she has learned too much and might get a mind wipe? What fate awaits her it just makes the mind boggle and the body shiver with goosebumps.

Also indeed insects do use their antennae to smell because bugs don't have a nose-Well mosquitos are an exception, but theirs suck blood. :) Luckily there are dragonflies who eat mosquitos so they don't feast on our blood and make us itch. Lol.
magiblue11 chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Quite an interesting story Khaos and forgive me I got a message for you from your BFF (Fairygal11)

Dear Khaos,

I want to apologize for all the messages and note letters to her during these past months. You didn't reply back back to them OR even to the poem that I wrote for you for our friendiversary-NOR DID YOU WISH me a happy birthday either. I'm not mad or anything, but it just made me sad that my BFF/Cyber sister would forget to send a monthly note letter to let me know how she's doing and how school has been OR even wishing me a happy birthday.

I'm sorry I've been crazy or been eccentric over you being gone for very long-A year now it's almost since you last vanish. I'm sorry for everything...I'm sorry for being so clingy or so annoying-I'M sorry, but can you blame a friend for worrying about her bestest friend in the world? CAN YOU BLAME ME for freaking out? Or paranoid that her friend would vanish forever from the digital world after SHE PROMISED she'd come back now and then, here and there? AND YOU came yet you didn't send me a monthly note letter since March-AND YOU looked at my poem I wrote but never commented or wished us a happy friendiversary?

Your not a horrible or bad person Khaos-Like I said in the note long ago-your the most incredible, nicest, kindest, coolest and amazing person who is my best friend that I'm happy to call my Cyber Sister. Look I understand Reality can be such a hassle and we all have our schedules and stuff to do and loved ones to hang and be with-BUT IT DOESN'T mean we can spare a time in our day to go back to Digitality (internet) and chat or even play a game. I know you want to focus on reality and follow your dreams-I understand that, but it still hurts that your not here OR send me a note letter every month to tell me what you've been up to. I've been telling you what I've been up to, sharing new stuff I found and even told you about that invader zim comic series that's coming into reality.

I learned to balance my reality and digitality equally so nobody is left out, so I can always be there for my friends and also going out and enjoying life from the laptop screen AND enjoying work too. YOU TAUGHT me that-EVERY story you told me and the things you've done, you taught me there was more to life than just a screen-YOU TAUGHT ME that Khaos and I am greatful for it!:Tears in eyes as they stream down her face.:

And I'm happy were friends-I'm just afraid that I'll never hear back from you ever again or you might find me so annoying from all the letters and notes I've sent lately that you don't wanna be my friend anymore because of it OR me being so clingy?...And I understand if I made you feel that way so I'm very sorry Khaos...I'm sorry.

I just wanted my friend back-I just wished things were the same as they were even if there was a difference, I want us to chat again, to share ideas, to role play again. I just things were like before-but I know things are different now and it'll never be the same again. And it hasn't been the same without you here...

It isn't me that miss you BloodRoseRed misses you too-I know you have friends that watch you and talk to, but me and BloodRoseRed are the closest friends you have and it wasn't right that you left us in the dark long ago when you vanished mysteriously. Then you came back by January when the new year came and told me what happened.

To be honest-deep down I was angry, mad, sad, excited-MY emotions were like a smoothie, but the important thing was that you came back and you were alright. Look Khaos-I gone to great lengths to try to find you somehow so I can talk to you. Friends go to great lengths to see or speak to their friends again.

I lost bffs in the past-One by betrayal in 5th grade, the other moved away and never replied back to me on facebook. ANOTHER friend in college who promised to stay in touch and didn't-I'M NOT GONNA lose my bestest friend in the world and Cyber sister...I don't want that happen. I don't want to lose you Khaos-I don't want us to lose touch or our bond. I don't want to lose anyone ever again...:(

So Khaos if you can find it in your heart to forgive me-if you can forgive everything that I ever did or say...Again I'm very very sorry...:( :cries:
CatGirlFireflare chapter 20 . 1/8/2015
Hm, maybe it's bigger on the inside. Keep goin', girl, solve the mystery! And stop the incoming humans from hurting ZIIIIIMM! Hehe, the computer is such a fun character, helpful yet unenthusiastic.
CatGirlFireflare chapter 19 . 3/8/2014
Nooooo! Dib why did you call them you foooool?! Ok, maybe that was kinda mean, I know he's been trying for such a long time to get proof but NOOOOOO, they're gonna hurt Ziiiiiiimmmm!
And I don't think that any of these chapters are garbage, or filler; they're great! It's super well-written and really exciting and interesting, with so-far unanswered questions! Like what exactly is wrong with her house...? SOMETHING's wrong...
CatGirlFireflare chapter 17 . 3/8/2014
*Gasps* Wow. I had NOT been expecting missiles! And the antennae thing is, again, really cool!
CatGirlFireflare chapter 12 . 3/5/2014
Hmm, cool idea about the antennae being for hearing AND smelling! I'd always thought it was just hearing... The descriptions of the injuries are splendid- they're really descriptive, but without being absurdedly gross. I'm glad the girl feels bad for him; she's very kind.
Arctii chapter 18 . 2/19/2014
...SHIT. *rounds up a mob* Zim fans, we must keep the Swollen Eyeball from fucking up our favorite alien! *picks up a pitch fork and a torch* LET'S GO GO GO! MOVE OUT!
TheDarkestTimeline chapter 18 . 2/17/2014
Evilllll!
TheDarkestTimeline chapter 17 . 2/9/2014
So excited to read more! Glad you updated!
I was the turkey chapter 16 . 6/29/2013
Ahh it feels like nothings happened I blame the big headed kid update soon please
Mistyblackheart chapter 16 . 7/1/2013
Please add more :)
Mistyblackheart chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
why no update :'(
Pizza lover 86 chapter 15 . 6/26/2013
Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooreee
Invader Pinn chapter 15 . 6/14/2013
Please continue, I love this fanfic.
Mistyblackheart chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
Love it :) please post more soon :)
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