I broke my cardinal rule and read an unfinished fic. I really enjoyed this. I wish you would write a summary for how you would see it end even though you’ve lost your mojo for it.

I like the way you handle the negative review you received. I'm new to fan fiction and I'm reading this fic two years after it was written, and i love it. I hate sam, but i love Kelly, the actress that portrays her. Elizabeth and Jason are my favorite couple in the show. However in fan fiction i love reading about them in other relationships. In my opinion you a very good of showing all of the main characters flaws and good points. My main problem with the show writters is Carly, Sam, and other characters have done so many negative thing then Elizabeth and are forgiven, while Liz is protrayed so negatively. She given only the men who Carly and Sam don't want or is used by Jason until Sam takes him back. And i don't like that Carly was allow to call her son a Bastard when Carly's first born fits the description as well. The writters have taken Liz way out of her original character, and don't like it. This is why i like your fic you give everyone a chance to change, and to see that not even they live their lives in a bubble of perfection.

amazing. glad to get an update. so can't wait for more

Great chapter, please update soon

Welcome back.
Great update.
Hope this is the start of many chapters still to come.

nice update, but you should try centering the script some.

Welcome back! Thank you for the update. I miss AJ & Elizabeth so I am very happy to see you continue this story!

AJ and Elizabeth I really do want to see them end up together because if they do get married think about it Elizabeth she will become a Quartermaine and AJ yes he will become Cameron and Aiden's step-father but Elizabeth she will become Michael's step-mother too and Elizabeth she will become Monica's daughter-in-law but she would be Jason's sister-in-law because she would be married to his brother AJ and Elizabeth and Sam would be sisters-in-law could you imagine?

But Baker he isn't stupid, I am sure he knows that the PCPD are tailing him or that they are on to him and he is not stupid enough to get caught because I am sure he has covered his tracks

But seeing Elizabeth's parents after all these decades seeing her father Jeff Webber, and him returning now makes so much sense but at the same time Jeff he does have a complicated history with AJ's mother Monica so think about how awkward this is?

But the fact that AJ was a hero tonight, he saved Molly's life, he could have died in the process, I don't care what anyone says but AJ he is a hero in my book and to think Elizabeth and Michael could have almost lost him

And Lucky I think he will move on with Mia I mean it is only a matter of time but he and Elizabeth do share 2 sons together, their sons Cameron and Aiden so they are always going to be a part of each other's lives but they have clearly moved on

I really enjoyed this! Hope you come back to finish it! :)

I have enjoyed reading the story so far. I am a Jason/Elizabeth fan but have been reading and loving the too few AJ/Elizabeth fics. I know its been a while since you updated...just wanted to let you know that I like it.

Wow, what a great story! Please, please update soon

Welcome Back!

love it

love it i like the idea of sabrina and matt had not thought of that pairing to bad hes not on the show right now

that was amazing and it seems that Lucky is still the same jerk he always was