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The proposal chapter was really really well written I was back and forth on whether she'd accepted or not

I love this fanfic so much because the characters have been potryaed flawlessly. I really like your molly above all because this is how I see her on the show loyal,sweet, madly in love and with strength more than we know she can have. I really want Sherlock and molly to end up together on the show. And I think you have written their relationship so well. But your fic have also shown me the bad part of their relationship which is toxic for Molly and her life. Your story made me realise that Molly gets so caught up in the whirlwind that is Sherlock that she neglects herself.
If Sherlock and molly are going to end up together in your story then Sherlock first has to earn Molly. He has to be worthy of her. And his track record isn't clean so he'll have to work really really hard.
It would be really cliche if the female protagonist throws herself in the male protagonist's arms without a thought and forgives him for every horrible thing he has ever done.
Molly trusts Sherlock with her life but she still has to him with hard heart.
But thank you so much for writing this beautiful story.

Damn...I sure do wish you would up date this story.
It is a good one... something we've been missing lately with this type of ship.

I just finished reading this. It was so good! The writing was at times a little dark. But really good. Kudos to you! Keep up the good work!

omg this phenomenal!

Oh, I love what you're doing with this story, it feels so real! Thank you for the great read!

Oh goodness, I just couldn't put the computer down! You grabbed me and just reeled me in. Also, I loved the parts from Tennyson's poems at the top of each page.
Christine (Guest)

This is incredible! Please update! I'm eager to see Sherlock declaring his love for Molly (because... *coughs*... that's what you're going to do, right?)

I love your writing. There's this bittersweet ache that always sits right under my breastbone after I finish one of your chapters- is this how Molly feels after an encounter with Sherlock? I would believe it to be so. There's just something about your Molly that really pulls at me- she's sweet and vulnerable with that touch of strength showing every now and again. She feels *real* to me while staying true to the show. And your Sherlock-! He's so enigmatic and abrupt and awkward and a complete, insufferable know-it-all and I love it. Those moments where he's quiet or when he takes a moment to really look at Molly, though... those are the best parts for me as a reader. Even though watching the two of them creates this sort of sadness within me, there's something very beautiful about their interaction. Also, masterful use of the "Lancelot and Elaine" quotes. They fit so very well with the story line- I just hope that you give Molly and Sherlock a happy ending, as opposed to poor Elaine. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Wonderful! Really! Miss it a lot! Thank you!

A lovely chapter, as ever. I wonder how Sherlock got himself shot this time.

Sorry I'm not logging in, I kinda forgot my password but I still want to reply to this as soon as I read it.

I love the abruptness of each section, how it demonstrates the cut Molly had with her potential life with Kyle and her thoughts and relationship with Sherlock. I love how you characterize Molly as a fighter and as someone far stronger than what people see from the outside. The dialogue and character interactions are always enjoyable to read. But I absolutely loved the last bit of the chapter and how you left it off with the 'Did you miss me' cliffhanger.

Kudos!

What a powerful story!

A great new chapter; very curious as to what will be said between Molly and Sherlock when they speak to each other again :)