Please update soon this is a good story so far and I really want to see the story progress

Please continue :)

Well I'm currently getting into Harry Potter. Halfway through the fourth book...
Though so far my favorite is the third...
Anywho ;p Since I'm a Hogwarts noob I thought it OFFICIALLY gave me the right to read your Harry Potter fanfiction and review properly. So...

"DSFKJDSgndskfgjasdlkfjoir73oirh3wef87dsdf" - Gosh darn you and your fabulous writing and making this a slash pairing. I just can't love you anymore right now, like, seriously. Begging you to update and will be waiting not-so-patiently for some Sirius and Nathans action.

Wow... I didn't expect an update so soon. I should get an attitude with authors more often. xD

Ha, but anyway, I'm glad to see your continuing this; it has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see more Sirius\OC interactions.

Just two complaints: could you add a little more to the paragraphs? You know, describe the area and what everyone's doing a little more? And also, I can never quite guess who's talking. When another person starts talking, typically, their dialogue is in a separate paragraph. Other than that, I have no more complaints.

Update soon!

So... this is never going to be updated, huh?

A couple of inor typos like too instead of two, other than that I would really love it if you continue this. :)

PS Nathan sounds nice.

Seems nice so far, a few errors, but nothing that makes me pull my hair out! I hope you continue! It's so hard for me to find Male OC slash fics! :) 3