Hello :)
Please tell me, you come back?
I read this fanfiction 5 years ago and now I still miss
You break my heart

Great time for some escapism. Or finishing some projects?

Hi Loren. I just binge watched LBD for the first time after reading your story. In comparison the actor come up way short of my expectations! With minor tweaking your story could be a stand alone modern p&p tale and attract the attention it deserves. What a great story! I just fear that many readers would be put off from the LBD link. I hope you can find the joy that writing brings again.

Wow LBD. What a blast from the past. A friend put me onto this and I'm glad she did. It's fantastic. To be honest though I can't quite picture how to resolve George with the Lydia fiasco that I know is coming. I almost have hope for the George that you've created like he could turn a good leaf yet.

The last time I read this story was with the first Hunsford chapter. That was sooo many years ago! I always say I’m going to catch up whenever I have time every time I get an update email. And I finally have. I reread everything from the beginning and it was a wild ride! I look forward to the rest of the Pemberley arc! I love how you fill in the blanks between episodes to show how Lizzie and Darcy really got close! Please keep updating! I was 20 years old when I started reading and now I’m 26 and a lot has happened since I last read this story but it’s nice to know that this piece of my early 20’s is still going strong!3

A friend put me onto this story. Any plans on finishing it?

Superb! Can't wait for more. I especially like the way you've given George depth . Thanks for the read. Eagerly awaiting more .

Keep going Loren. This is such a fantastic story ... It really deserves an end. They are the best developed characters I've read on fan fic in a long time. It's my second time reading in 2 years and can't wait for more. Please. Maybe a LBD rewatch is in order for inspiration?

I read this fic a super long time ago, adored it, then couldn't find it again! I was so disappointed. Then, lo and behold, I stumbled upon it tonight and have loved reaquainting myself with this incredible story.

This version of Lizzie and Darcy and cute in all of their awkwardness and raw energy; however, I think you do them a disservice by jumbling their story with much unneeded thoughts. What I mean is, you tend to elaborate in great detail over just what a character is thinking, and it gets tedious. The explanations and rabbit holes in the character's thinking gets to be so long that I start skipping over it.

You do nail the explanations in a few parts though, such as when Darcy is thinking about that one day putting sunscreen on Lizzie, and when Lizzie "fills in the blanks" on what she thinks Darcy is thinking.

All in all, I believe the story would be greatly enhanced if you cut out like a third of the "thinking," which would allow the reader to infer what the characters are feeling, and it would allow you to write quicker and update more often.

Love you, love the fic.

It has been a year. Would you please give it a try. Would love another update soon.

Please give us soms more Dizzyness!

Thank you!

I feel lucky that I found those story later and was able to read all 22 chapters together. Really good! Looking formatting the next update!

What an amazing story! This is the first story I've read that really captured the sadness and loneliness of Darcy and the real struggle he's facing to overcome his up-bringing. I really, really, hope that you keep adding to this story - there are lots of loyal fans out here begging :)

I had totally forgotten about this story but this update was sitting in my inbox for a really long time and I decided to reread and wow, now I want to rewatch LBD too! I forgot how good this fic is!

Hey! I just saw you updated this amazing fic that I had been dying to read. As always, it made for a very interesting read, and you offered a intriguing new look into the characters thinking. I would like to ask if you have any plans to update, "Strange Attractors", too, because, apart from this one, I absolutely love that story of yours too. I really hope that you haven't abandoned it.