Keep writing and don’t listen to non talented people they are just jealous of your accomplishments !

I love your writing, keep it up cause you’re very talented!

Great story

Ana hears Christian going through a nightmare and Taylor stops her before she goes in his room. What will Ana do now?

Christian going to Ana’s apartment to make sure she’s okay or for something else.

Jose is hoping for something between him and Ana that’s never going to happen. Christian needs to say something before things get really weird.

I’m going to read the next chapter because you got me on the edge of my seat on how your going to get Ana and Christian together sexually. I liked Taylor’s POV nice to know he really cares for his boss.

They will be going out to dinner tomorrow night Ana said 6:00 but Christian needed to take control back so he said 6:30 really. Can’t wait to read Christian giving up some of that control when he’s dating Anastasia Steele.

Glad she called him back hope she says something that will let him feel she will give him a chance to see each other again.

That’s a twist Ana fainting when she saw the playroom. This is going to be firsts for each of them. Ana loosing her virginity to Christian and him making love to her which he’s never done before.

Taking Ana straight to his playroom will she stay or run.

Love your writing, keep up the great work!

Love your writing, but I was hoping she would be pregnant.

Wow thanks for the very good read.

You should have used prostate stimulation vice just the plug.