Reviews for Assassin's Jealousy
Shin Hyo Joon chapter 11 . 6/11/2019
its may be so late i read this story but to be honest its so good and i read it from beginning to the end .
this story is maybe already past 6 years and still entertain me so much .
tbh i love Yami Character in To Love Ru .
its like he combine about kuudere and Tsundere in same time .
i dont know if you still do same story or maybe you already inactive .
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I just wanna say thanks for the Meal ( Story )
its really Great .
Iridocyclitis666 chapter 5 . 5/29/2016
omgggggg so kawaii im going to explode

*WHAT THE- BOOOOOMMM*
Zaralann chapter 11 . 9/14/2015
Wonderful! Sequel!
vienx.001 chapter 11 . 3/12/2014
hell yeahhhh !
double combo yami-eve,,
although i prefer eve,, in BC she is more cute,, i think,,
thanks the story
but wouldnt it better if there are more their rivaly scene
zylos101 chapter 11 . 8/7/2013
That was incredible I really like the story do me a favor and make a rito x yui story
Oh and I like the part when rito actually fought back.
get bent broski chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
Thank you for the great ending. I will be looking forward to more of your work.
Quick question: will you still be doing that oneshot of Rito and Kyouko? Because you mentioned it in chapter 8
ralf07 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
hm... the idea is superb! but your writting is... i dont really care whether the grammar is great or not but i think you need to work on the way you describe the situation. the way i read this it feel like i just read a bunch of monotone dialouge without understanding what just happen. because of that even if the character was in character it feel like ooc to me. well that my honest oppinion that is so there room for improvement.
Savaris chapter 10 . 6/28/2013
Damn, read through it all in one sitting! Interesting concept here. Love the interactions between Yami, Rito and Eve! Let's also not forget Black n' Train! Looking forward to more. Also, kudos to your High School DxD fic!
get bent broski chapter 9 . 6/5/2013
Oh my god! You just blew my mind with the whole Black/Train encounter!
Best chapter ever!
bunny-loverXIV chapter 9 . 6/3/2013
I would have thought Eve would have thought Black was Train, because they look so alike and Black would not be so protective of Yami but Train would be to Eve. Black wear a long black coat like Train did as the Black cat.
get bent broski chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
Can't wait to see what happens next... I don't think I can last long...
But take your time
Bluebeard chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
don't leave us...
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2013
A meeting between Black and Train?

AWW YESSSSSSS

Time to get to the more interesting parts.
Pedobear chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
Loved that they made up. That was awesome!
Was it Black or Black cat? I got confused.
bunny-loverXIV chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
awesome! Yay I loved the arc with Kuro/Black. I wonder if his real name is Train since Yami's was Eve.
one thing is you might want to change the tense to past tense it would sound a lot better.
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