Wow I am so glad I found this story.

I really enjoyed it and I am glad she gave Loki a second chance.

Please write more, I think your writing is very good and the characters were quite well done. Your OC was very good and her thoughts came across really well in your writing style.

I hope you write more Loki soon.

I love this story and I love these characters. I know you retired this character except for Loki, but I think you should turn this into a series. This was awesome.

Definitely an interesting story. I like the way Alex changes and grows in character throughout the story, and Loki's influence on her.

I love the character development here. Thank you for writing!

Well sleeping is my favorite pastime too

Odd, how many scenes begin and end with sleeping. Sometimes there is not even that much going on in between, which makes me wonder: how much sleep does that girl need? :D
And, Oh No! not an dream scene again! whether a memory, a prophecy or psychological insights - it never advances the plot in any way. It's like a commercial break in a good movie. Besides dreaming in real life doesnt work this way - at all - so it's all poetic waxing.

Sorry for being offensive. I havn't been able to tolerate high doses of dream scenes since twilight. cool story though. the drama is not as much fun to read as some of your other works. Which is the nature of drama. Well, got to get back to reading...

I loved it!

Great story! Spent all day reading it.

Wow. Loved it. By the eighth chapter I figured out how she's lost her memory, but after the tenth I had no idea how it would end.
Great job!

I love, love, LOVE this story! I was worried at times because it contained quite a few elements of other Loki stories I've read, but you did a great job of making it your own and keeping it interesting.

Another fantastic story and it's complete! I just love your writing and I hope you continue to share your stories in this verse.

This is very good! Emotional turmoils and drama are felt so vividly from your writing.

Amazing story! I loved reading every minute of it!

Hello. I don't often read OC and Loki fiction, but of the ones I have, this is definitely one of the best. Thanks for a great story. £££

very well done I really enjoyed reading this a lot.