That was horrible

1. You've written this well until it came to describing Nanami's outfit and Tomoe's revelation of his feelings for her
2. Nanami confessed her love to Tomoe and she's still going on that date?! Wouldn't that be playing with both boys feelings? And
3. Someone else's review was correct, they have kissed much more than once - sorry!
Other than that, well doe u

You're really good writer. What's wrong about a boy enjoying a shojo story. I mean it's not like on;y girls should read shojo and boys should read shounen.

But wouldn't that be their third kiss? they've kissed two or three times in the manga... (- _ -;)\ Forgive my rudeness.

Many thanks for sharing your story. I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you will continue or write another story.

love this