I love the fact that Sharon actually gets a case of the giggles when she wants to impress Andy

I can't get enough of this story. I also can't help but laugh!

Love this story. I love how Sharon is acting like a teenager with her 1st love and how she is always thinking of Andy and it's getting in the way of her being professional

J'ai adoré et bien ri !

awesome ty

I love how you maintain Sharon's strength of character. Sharon and Andy's scenes together are sooo sweet! It's adorable when Sharon loses her composure because Andy's being such a precious puppy.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the kiss!

This is a great story. A nice mixture of fun and casework. Well done with the case, I've always found them difficult to write. I love how Andy and Sharon's relationship developed, and the tender moments with Sharon and Rusty. This is really well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

I'm reading this whole story but wanted to comment here to say, great kiss! Loving this fic so far!

LOL - I love Provenza's line at the end there. :)

This was fantastic! Just so well written omg. Characterization was spot on which made it great. Also I loved that you created quite an elaborate case that I was as interested in as I was their relationship. The fact that it spans only a few days is good too. This seriously felt like an episode and a really good one at that. You're a fantastic writer. Keep it up! I'm definitely going to read the sequel. I'd start nowbut I should probably go to bed... Ps I folowed you on tumblr today :)
Rosalyn

I'm dying from how sweet this last chapter is. You did such a great job of putting them together in a way that is in character for both of them, and at least a bit believable for their jobs. Love it so so much!

I only have a couple of chapters left but I have to say, real quick, my favorite thing about this story is Provenza and Rusty teaming up. I've been convinced since about halfway through the first season of Major Crimes that Provenza has developed a grudging respect for Sharon, and even a bit of a soft spot for her because she took in Rusty and cared for him despite the fact that he didn't exactly treat her with the utmost of respect at first. He will always be outwardly grumpy but when you look past the surface he's really just a softie.

Very well written chapter! I like the movie segue at the end.

Wow...I was laughing like a fool at the end of chapter 5 and beginning of chapter 6...Provenza is hilarious!