Wow, that was... intense. I feel as though I should have a lot to say about it, and yet, I can't think of anything. But I've always loved stories that explore deep, emotional ideas like this, and I think you did a wonderful job with this one.

This was very good. There's something about a slow and steady build-up that made the (relatively) happy ending almost inevitable.

Thank you for sharing.

Touching story. Good work!

Like it lots, thanks for the awesome story!

Beautiful writing.

A truly beautiful piece. One of a kind.

Well written. Though there's some parts that don't make as much sense in the context of the characters. For example, I can't imagine anyone as mothering and who valued her mother as much as Katara not being able to have children.