I don't really understand why your talking shit about jake, I feel so detached to these characters I don't give a single fuck. See, if I don't care about bella then I don't care about her problems. I don't hate jake because you have failed to make me care about bella. She is not a woman stuck in circumstance. It sounds like her problems are of her own making. If she had made something of herself then she wouldn't have lost custody of her son. But she decided to become a skank at a strip club and do drugs. And I have no sympathy for a woman that would rather kill herself then fight for her kid.

Hes never hurt an innocent person before? Ya I really doubt that. He fucks and then kills women...but what? He only fucks and kills women that have "bad"? Ya, right.

Im guessing that JBs pov was supposed to what, make us not like him? But honestly? I fucking agree with him! Bella does seem like a piece of trash and a slut! She had sex with Edward right after meeting him. Hell she agreed to "stay with him forever" right after meeting him. That tells me that's shes desperate, clingy, and really fucking stupid.

Sounds like Edward is a hoe, perfect for naïve, depressed, pathetic Bella.

That was kinda gross

Why does Edward keep repeating himself? "Forever MORE" Geez, Shut the fuck up.

I feel like Bella is the type of girl to really latch on to men. CLINGER!

The "sounds and smells" drew him into the strip club? LOL gross.

Can you feel your eyes turn color? Im not sure that makes sense.

Bellas excuse for working in a strip club is that her parents are poor? LMFAO Ya, cause that makes sense.

She has a kid but she longs for death? Well I see why jake keeps her away from the kid, shes a worthless piece of shit.

Im guessing her ex bitches BECAUSE shes a worthless addict AND a stripper. You cant really bitch if you don't even try to change.

Thank you

:) loved this

Nice story. :)

Hahahahaha one of the shittest stories I've ever read.

Sounded promising. This is god awful.