Love it! I realy did! Shika is realu cute an so much better than Sasuke

always shikamaru will be first for Ino. love it so much. the hate, the passion, the lies and the love. this made me happy

Love love love ittttttt:)

SO CUTE 3

Wow, good job! I like it

haha! soo cute . please do some more!

Wow! Great story!

I think guys with dark hair look good in pink shirts, but still I find it impossible to imagine Shika in a pink shirt... Impossible!

I like the name part in the end and what Shika said too! Well I love Shika! I wanna have him sleep next to me in boxers!

Grammar and language is also very good!
Really brilliant work!
:D

muhahahahahahahha.. good job, Shika!

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Lovely and at same time a little dark . I loved reading it ... :D

ohmaigod. i love u. this fanfic is so CUTE! XD

make more! MOAAAARRRRRR X3

So awesome You did a great job in keeping them in character. I loved every bit of it Great one-shot

this story fits them well and i believe something like this could happen in the manga but it wont its just so Ino and Shikamaru