Amazing

very unique plot and an even more unique pairing
I honesty have never read another fanfic as original and fresh as this one

I liked it there aren't much deepvastshipping story's out there

Wow nice

Oh what no big dramatic kiss... Nice story

Very sentimental.

The cameramen are foolish. They think that this is all a game, but Unova is under a real threat.

Ash and Shopping ?! The moment Ash asked Rosa to go shopping, he seemed a bit OOC. Not every girl likes to go shopping a try 1000 dress in a shopping mall. I am kinda dissapointed that you made Rosa a shopping freak like May, Misty and Dawn. Other than that, your story is great.

I meant that this is definitly the first story of Ash x Rosa.

This is definitly the Ash x Rosa story in fanfiction . net. I loved reading this story. I hope you write more stories about this pairing, fanfiction . Net needs more Ash x Rosa stories.

Gyarados isn't a bad Pokemon to use... until you encounter any electric move (most commonly Thunderbolt) and then it is less useful than a wet paper bag.

please make a sequel

This is really great. Could you please do a Sequel (preferably longer like their journies around Unova)?

I liked this story a lot. The pairing of Ash K./Satoshi and Rosa/Mei is a rare one indeed. I would really like to see a follow up story to this. I really want to see a good loving relationship develop between the two. Those two would make a great couple! Keep up the awesome work on all of your stories!

aww too bad its over I would of loved to see what would happen from here