Update soon please

Wow. Rosa's so stupid. Not much of clueless, but stupid.

Can I just say, that as a teacher.. THIS IS THE STORY OF MY FREAKING LIFE. Oh my god. This! This is exactly why I like Cheren! My family is in the next room laughing at me for laughing so hard when Cheren dropped the S-bomb.

Sorry. Now that I'm done raving this is... hilarious. I love stories that really get at how clever and resourceful Cheren is without making him into a total jerk. While making the player character into an idiot is an unorthodox and often offensive way of pulling that off, honestly a lot of Pokemon fans really are that way. The tie to his liepard, Cobalion's reaction, and especially that "holy shit" were absolutely fantastic. It's stuff like this that makes me like Cheren.

And this is how I feel every time a student e-mails me. Seriously.

Good job.

XD

How is Rosa that clueless? She saw Cobaloin before Chargestone too! And was told what the pokemon was! How does she not know? And, I haven't gotten that far in the game yet, (about to battle Skyla to be more precise), but it always seems strange when people just react normally to things like that.

Cheren: Holy Shit
LOL
Great story, and I love love love the humour and Mei's ignorance, and the overall story is humorous, but shouldn't the Pokémon's species names be in capitals like, Evee or Lillipup?
But, great story, love the funny and thumbs up to you, DarkAngelTorchic!

Your a pretty good author... And I agree with you I actually wasn't paying attention so I walked into it and only noticed around 5 minutes later!

It's pretty funny and I should agree with you. Maybe you'd like to post the next chapter because this fic made my day. Clueless Rosa is pretty cute. Love the part when cobalion glared at her she went back to Undella.

Having not played any of the Gen V games, I had no idea what was happening until I read the A/N's after the fic, but I have to admit that the idea itself was pretty bananas (ISOFUNNY). Fun read.