So, then, Pepper's cheating on Tony and Natasha on Clint. Whether or not Tony would like it, it was clear that she never asked him about an open relationship, or involving another person, and considering that Natasha says it should be kept secret, I can assume the same. I've been liking the story, but this really irks me because the fact of the matter is that they are both being unfaithful, and are about to go another round knowing the full girth of their actions while completely sober, leaving no excuses (not that being drunk is an excuse at all). What they did is just cheat on their significant other, plain and simple, and while I know that it's not my story, I simply want to make known, as a reader, how terrible I think this is, especially when Pepper is about to be married.

BEST CHAPTER EVER!
I looove your writing and can't wait to read more.
I know you posted this a while back but happy 2020.

Wow okay...they got close and personal their second time meeting each other? That sounds highly unlikely...I mean I like the story so far but it’s just so unrealistic that two traumatized people would be so open about what traumatizes them

omg, you've given me inspiration.

Please tag your story right. It would let people that specifically research for OC to actually find it. And allow people that don't like it to not have a lot of irrelevant suggestion that blur their research...

this is the 4th time im rereading this. it is wonderfully written! it also inspired me, an empath myself, to persue a psychology degree. i graduate fron Southern New Hampshire Uni December 2019 with May bachelor's and then i go back for my master's in child pysch. thank you for that push!

I really like your story so far but one thing in this chapter I must comment on. Being an anaesthesiologist and working in trauma teams on a regular basis, I must say that it never occurred to me to question treating a patient or not based on a criminal record. Whoever comes to the emergency room is treated with all possible means no matter what he/she has done beforehand. We stich them up so they can face justice when they are better. We are doctors not judges, so we treat patients, we do not judge them. I know this is but fiction and you added this line for dramatic reasons and let me add: great drama so far! Still I couldn't leave it at that. You might understand me being passionate about my job, so keep up being passionate about your writing which ist highly appreciated.

Amazing story. Loved every word of it :D

I got to chapter 7 and... I'm sorry but here is some creative criticism: For me the character development is rushed and the way the character Kara and sort of the Avengers too, how they are all acting around Loki is kind of unrealistic when considering Kara, she barely knows him and the Avengers hate Loki, except for Thor for the most part. All I'm saying, and I know this story is already completed I find myself having a hard time reading and wanting to continue this because it is so unbelievable in the way the characters are reacting and acting towards one another. I swear I'm not trying to come off rude or too harsh but that is my personal opinion.

Yay! XD What an ending! And you brought in the awesome Wolverine! Great job with this all around. I can't wait to see how you continue this and tie up loose ends in the sequel! I'm gonna go read it now.

I've just found this fic. I can't believe its been up for a whole year and a half and I didn't know. This thing is a work of art. Every sentence had me hooked for more. Literally could not stop reading, like seriously, I was still reading the day before one of my university exams :P It was SO worth it though! I think yours is one of my favourite depictions of Loki. And the humour...you are one funny girl! Anyway, can't wait to check out your other stuff! Especially about Sif and Nyvorlas. They are too cute!

Hi Kiera, Thanks for a fabulous story with a great OC in Kara. Wonderfully drawn out romance between Loki and Kara. Kept me coming back to this story 5 days in a row. Enjoyed the development of all the supporting characters especially Clint, Natasha, Sif and her new beau.
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Holy holy shit. I love this fanfic too much for words. This being my first loki/oc fic (I'm pretty much the captain of the tasertricks ship lol) I loooooove who's you developed Kara! Can't wait for the smutty one shots, because your smut if peeeeeerfection. I love how the sexytimes weren't just limited to Kara and loki too..anyhoooo you done great and I love you. Xoxox

Alright, I'll admit that Odin still has SOME sense left in him. :-)

AWWWWW! XD