Wow! This was so descriptive, I loved every word of it!

AWESOME! Oh, and I hope you get well soon, I read your Bio. It's not fun being sick :-(

I too enjoyed very much this short story, although my faith lies on another fandom. It is very much in-character (with a touch of spice, hehehe!) and may I say a most fitting birthday present for TeaOli :-)

hopeful... This. Is. Perfection.

Perfectly in character.
Perfectly plausible.
Wonderfully wrought.

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Tea