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Havok22 chapter 104 . 7/12 It’s great reading these stories. On chapter 104 and still going. Keep up the good work. |
Havok22 chapter 30 . 7/10 Wow. I’m glad I found this story, I’m going to spend my week of vacation catching up. Very enjoyable. |
Roztov chapter 2 . 4/27 fixed the chapter thing :) was just the title - all the story was there |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24 There’s no chapter 331. It’s good, though |
Cadelorbe12 chapter 22 . 1/9/2018 Great Scott, this is incredible! If this is what D&D is... than i want to play it. 0v0 |
ThorneInYourSide chapter 256 . 7/30/2017 Your sessions sound like great fun, and I can see how your writing has improved. If you have the chance I would always recommend a quick re-read to check for spelling and grammar niggles, but the impact is fairly negligible as your chapters are short and exciting. I like how the characters have fleshed out over time, and that you have kept the sense of fun and humour througout. Well done, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Vyrazhi chapter 1 . 6/6/2017 Very short, but very amusing. I'm definitely going to read more. :) |
XanderInkWaster chapter 1 . 11/1/2016 Damn this is some great ****. How the heck do you not have more reviews? |
Guest chapter 208 . 8/24/2015 Realistic. Good. |
Guest chapter 199 . 2/3/2015 More please Rollo! Your adventures provide thrills and great amusement! |
Falcon777 chapter 18 . 7/30/2013 You obviously aren't going to stop updating considering you have as many chapters as you do. And it's entirely possible that you've already heard this from other people who have just read the story but not left a review, but I'm going to say it anyways: Pick a tense. Don't talk in past tense then talk in present. Choose one and stick with it. I'll keep on reading up to chapter 30 or so before I mention this again so that I'm not just spamming you with the same message. Falcon777 |
Falcon777 chapter 16 . 7/29/2013 Dang, poor sisters indeed. This is quite the interesting concept, and it gives me some ideas. |
Roztov chapter 3 . 6/3/2013 Hi! thanks for reading. To address you comments : 1. The chapters get longer I assure you! I blether on for ages now :) 2. You are right about Stirges - that was Rollo getting it wrong. 3. Raz is short for Raz'iel o, the name is not from a DD game. I think the player took it from an old play station game 4. For more on the players - go here : s/9355559/1/Forgotten-Realms-Characters 5. We are playing version 3.5 |
Dumbledore is Gay chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 The entries are a bit short. Still, it's only day 1 & 2 so far, so it could go either way. Stirges don't exclusively feast on human blood, pretty sure about that. They prefer humanoid maybe, but I'm certain they can digest other sorts of blood as well, otherwise you'd hear about a lot more stirge-related deaths in chronicles. Perhaps even stirge plagues, when their population expands too much and they start depopulating villages, and adventurers have to be called in to deal with this. By Raz are you referring to THE Raz, arcane trickster extraordinaire? There were some awesome campaign anecdotes floating around the Wizards forums (I think), about a dude that played a mean Arcane Trickster - style, panache, smarts, and outrageous stunts. Try and get the original author's permission if you use that character, even if only as an NPC. Would be nice if we can get more personal info about the author of the diary (that is, the character that's writing it). Such as - a situation reminding them of something in their past, dangers they've braved, past accomplishments, more pronounced likes / dislikes and so on. Other than this, nice to see a campaign journal getting posted. Good luck with it. What edition are you playing? |
Roztov chapter 1 . 4/28/2013 (Author's Note : Mr Badgerington is Rollo's (who is a druid) animal companion - a badger!) |