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This was pretty good.

Gross. To much detail like honestly. And made it sound like Kerry was getting hurt so yeah I didn’t enjoy it

She is soooo pregnant

You should write one for Dana just like this one

sexy made me aroused

thanks got a hard one Kerry got some nice tits i would fist her and make the slut give me a blow job deep in her tight pussy

jjj

Amazing, so hot

Great, dramatic story. Could've been Romance/Drama