Thank you so much for finishing this piece! I hope you gave yourself a high five for completing it!
I like how it had a happier ending but not too cheesy or fairytale-like. You left it open enough to continue onward, but also closed it enough so it feels complete now. Those are the best kinds of endings, the ones that lead into beginnings. :)

Yeah! I hope this is a harmen. It given the sighns

Great story. I love the way you write Gary and Hank. They have good chemistry and Gary becoming a Venture bodyguard seems like a reasonable idea.

You're really an excellent writer.

Pretty good story.

I hope you update this story as soon as you can.

Still good I like Hank survale skills he was smart but still kind made a mistake but you got to love him still suggest a harem only because I love Hank I don't get why ever one love Dean he ok guy but Hank is like my favorit lot love Hank

It pretty good but are there more girls I think it be cool if it was turn into a harem first a girl try to kill Hank then fall in love with him cool huh

Wow this is shaping up to be a really cool story. Hank having to save himself? From a psycho chick? This I gotta see! There just aren't enough Hank Venture fics. Or Venture Brothers fanfiction period. I tried writing one but ran out of steam with it. I'm contemplating a second try and this story is pretty inspiring so far.