Beautiful story.

Well you made me eat crow. But you lost me as a fan the one thing you were close was Dallass picking in the top 10 of the draft because they will be sucking for years to come especially with Philly having went, and just drafting ,Milled Sanders and the Alshon Jeffery clone outs couldn't you send Mellark to Philly no city is better to a hardworking player than us . But we let you know when your not giving 100%

I knew it he has to give up a promising football carreer and she couldn't be happier hip more at for Katnis s orgasms by the score,shed not even fighting it he could finish his junior year and enter the draft early make enough $ to get them the help they need.I understand he wants to help his family and dad but she couldn't be happier about the while this for a girl who doesn't give even in sex unless she gets off at least twice ,has she even really went down on him except her little person,selfish lover typically Katniss

Of this girl causes him to leave college and football early because she can't basically less than year apart she's the real life colleagate athletes don't get that much summer break but for your story it's less a separation and she wants him to bail after a summer together knowing he'll come back if only to make sure the farm doesn't lose all the workers he's already said he'd rather be there than anywhere. In the computer age with Skype and everything long distance relationship are much easier and couldn't open up to a man for her first 22years how much you wanna wager she's dating before he's home for thanksgiving or Christmas 's always been too much drama,mentally too high maintenance.I don't wanna hear she thinks she's doing him a favor nf l isn't a lock and how many pro players wives can u name off the top of your head it's easy to stay out of the hoopla. She wouldn't even talk it out she waited til they got to the airport maybe instead of stockpiling orgasms and treating him like he was a holler with a time limit they could have worked it out the night before or morning I hope Mr Mellark fires. Her add or Mrs Mellark starts treating her like the trash she is if someone did that to one of my kids and expected me to feed board and pay them they'd be in for the shock of their if I had the closet Mr m has i would throw the tramp a parade where she road through town in the stock's getting pelted by rotten e and stuff from the stables. This guy did for her what she probably would have gone through life without only he could be that patient she has non just cuz she can't get her daily multiple orgasms she breaks his heart miles from girl

Great story. Looked u up on Ao3 but turns out you never wrote anymore hunger games fics. Hope you come back to it eventually.

that's a nice unnecessarily overglorifying depiction of o Katniss POV ..thanks

I can't describe how much I loved this fanfic.
Seriously! It's just perfect from beginning to end.

I'm a bawling mess...this story is amazing.

love this story its really good as far as ive read i look forward to reading the rest and its weird cause we go to texas all the time and theres that weird red river rivalry between our states and youl be talking to someone and they ask where your from and you say oklahoma and a weird look would come across their face but any how sorry for making this so long have a nice day

~okie from shawnee

I enjoyed this story a lot. The descriptions were had won me over and also the fact that it stepped several feet away from the usual fandom cliches. A great story I read in one sitting. Than you.

Oh gosh, I feel like I went through a lifetime with them. I loved this story. My heart it feels so happy :)

Man, I cried. UGH I have this horrible feeling that he doesn't make it and I'm praying that he does.

Wow! This story was absolutely amazing! I loved it and couldn't put it down. It was all very well written!

Ur such a talented author!

Omg the last paragraph of this chapter. Ugh. So beautiful.