Why not do a sequel? Just I loved, I have no words, I ask you please, follow it.

Oh man why? I was hoping they would both go home. :(

That just about broke my heart! I cried... I cried for poor Emma that would be the worst thing ever! Way to go SNow... Saving her baby but poor Emma..

I hope you make it a 2 parter instead of a short :)

I knew before I even read the story that there would be sacrifice. I really liked the mirror trick. I would live to read a sequel in which Snow gets back, even if that means Vita does, too. Aftwrall, that wasn't all of the wardrobes ashes...

Oh my heart is broken...A one-shot? But I need to know if she gets home! I need more!

perfect. i could see this happening.

That was so good. I really enjoyed this chapter.

Awwww...so sad but definitely something Snow would do. But despite the angst I always love your OUAT stories. They are always well written and feel very in character.

Great job! Looking forward to that sister story :)

This was great. I can actually see Snow doing this. Nice piece.

Wow, this was excellent! It was well-written and heart-breakingly beautiful. Although I doubt the show would go in such an angsty direction, I found everything about this story to be 100% believable. My one complaint would be that it's just a one-shot, but I'm excited to read the sister story you mentioned.

Oh god that was so sad! I almost cried, but... not follow?! It would be so exciting to see the reunion of Snow and Emma! :)